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Contest: Light Hearted About Kids

Sponsor: Miranda Hawley

26 March 2025

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Young Bobby Tucker chats the whole day through His teacher said, “That's all you ever do. Today is geography, what you can do for me Is form a sentence using ‘Katmandu’ “I’m pretty certain you won’t have a clue But I would like an answer out of you.” “Well, Batman don’t chase mice,” Bobby said in a trice “But you can bet your life that Katmandu.”

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Date: 3/31/2025 8:36:00 PM
Excellent job, Terry. You are a 'prudent student!' Don't forget (next time): "Katmandu" rhymes with 'Cat Ballou.' ~ Lee Marvin
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Date: 4/3/2025 3:35:00 PM
This gag was in my head for ages before I finally got it into some kind of rhyme. Glad you enjoyed GW ;-)
Date: 3/29/2025 4:21:00 AM
Well Mr. Terry flood and Kathmandu, I know you , how you, will always surprise us, with with no fuss, you are just clever, and dissapoint us never. Good one my friend.. Blessings Jennifer
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Date: 3/29/2025 9:53:00 AM
It’s a weird thing, Jennifer, I was aware of the correct spelling of Kathmandu…. But I went with the ‘no H’ spelling to befit the theoretical superhero in Bobby’s answer. Which makes no sense at all because that would also suggest that his answer should have begun with a C. Crikey… now I’m conducting an in-depth analysis of my own limerick. I need to get a hobby ;-)
Date: 3/26/2025 9:47:00 PM
What a cute punchline. Loved that!
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Date: 3/28/2025 3:06:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Slightly clumsy flow, but the best I could manage. Ho hum!
Date: 3/26/2025 1:40:00 PM
ha! very clever, terry!
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Date: 3/28/2025 3:04:00 AM
Thanks, Ilene. Tried hard to get the whole thing into one Limerick but it just wouldn’t happen.
Date: 3/26/2025 1:34:00 PM
ha ha ha very witty Terry
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Date: 3/28/2025 3:04:00 AM
Not the best flowing Limerick I’ve ever written, but I kinda liked the gag. Thanks, Jan

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