Karma

Tell you what it is

I do not know

How can we all believe in something we can not see?

Life is just as real as our sins.

We play a game, day in, day out.

All we can do is smile and try not to pout.

We can all get through this life together you see, paying it forward so we can just let your god be.

He can keep his day of rest as I will work on cleaning my own mess.

The sins I have made.

I will make amends and work on regaining back all my lost and lonely friends.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 4/25/2015 11:03:00 PM
Jillian, Congratulations on your awesome win in Richard Lamoureux's "Tell Me" contest. Have a nice day. LINDA
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Jillian Sabecky
Date: 4/27/2015 9:26:00 AM
Thanks Linda
Date: 4/25/2015 9:33:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest. Congratulations on your win.
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Jillian Sabecky
Date: 4/25/2015 9:42:00 AM
Right on! Thank You!
Date: 3/23/2015 9:45:00 AM
I enjoyed this honest piece. For myself I tried many years to carry my own burdens, it made me frustrated and tired. I can't tell you how freeing it was to pass those burdens on to a loving God. You seem like a seeker, I hope you find what you are searching for.
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