Karachi Girl

I saw a girl,a fair beauty,
Whose sunny brightness 
Impressed my eyes.
I thought i was confused,
No!i have to be composed.

"Hello,eyes desire?"my
Words were in slow motion.
"Hello,strange comer,"her
 Words were even slower... 
She must be without palaver.

My notion got unleashed, 
Truly and carefully,
Convincing her like never before.
A melodious subtle laughter followed,
Like something from my guitar,
Making her display her verdicts. 

She is the karachi girl,
Hometown in pakistan,grand daughter 
Of a goldmine,in love with me,
A penny boy for nature 
And affection's sake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 24, 2013 at 11:20 AM
Charles, ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Enjoy the new coming week, and Thanksgiving Holiday.. Always a poet friend <3 =LINDA
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November 22, 2013 at 11:42 AM
Hi Charles,, Congratulations on having your poem Featured this week. Loving ~SKAT~
Baity Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 4:19 PM
Wow Charles you Painted a very beautiful Picture!!!!!!! I love it..!!!!!
A   Avatar
November 17, 2010 at 8:46 AM
Hum here scoping out your first poem.. Nice the feeling you share with our poet minds,, are very descriptive..love the imagery.. I love the line where you say ""making her display her verdicts" lovely girl,, enjoyed your poem,..pd.
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 9:56 AM
thanks sweetheart.
Babcock Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 4:15 PM
This is a nice write about a Karachi girl. Well done. God Bless Phyl
Sweetheart Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 11:56 AM
Very nice write Charles with broad emotions simply stated in your lines.. thankxxx for recommending it to me... and for your very sweet soup mail.. full of compliments.. hope u will continue to enthrall all of us with your poetry and creative themes and I hope to do the same luv..
Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 5:45 AM
Very beautiful pen picture you have painted of the karachi girl, Charles
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