Kaput

Some days I'm firing on all cylinders it seems Then it all goes kaput and it's nothing but steam Try to muddle through Not easy to do Till I wiggle and giggle and once again beam This limerick “KAPUT” was inspired by my sister in crime, Jan Allison! © Jack Ellison 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 8/14/2015 5:07:00 AM
A most lovely inspiration! Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/14/2015 6:20:00 AM
YOU INSPIRE ME!!! Love, Jack xxx
Date: 8/1/2015 9:58:00 AM
I think your in full play mode here... But if you're some what depressed today... I have a new poem just put on the site. Love from Carol, Hubby, Dragon, Grandpa Troll, and our menagerie.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/1/2015 5:19:00 PM
I will toddle on over and check it out!!! Love, Jack xxx
Date: 8/1/2015 7:48:00 AM
ha ha ha - I knew you could do the kaput rhyme lol - Crystal at the garage loved my poem Jack it is pinned in the reception room now lol:-) hope the blood test went well:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/1/2015 7:56:00 AM
We are family my dear brother Jack :-) hugs Jan xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/1/2015 7:55:00 AM
I must be psychic... my email notified me I had a response to one of my poems which I JUST finished posting! Low and behold, of course it was my dear sister Jan!!! Happy you got a kick out of it! Love, Jack xxx
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