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Kaleidoscopic Heart

The colours of my heart shine bright with vivid fantasies and future fairytales enlightened by soft hues of long lost childhood dreams. Baby blues, earthly greens and clouds of passion pink create a kaleidoscope so beautiful when seen through my own lens. A myriad of failures reflect in discontent to obscure insufficient images seen through your own judgement. I am panchromatic, falsely seen as achromatic, by your optical perception when doubtful shades absorb my light. Dawn defends the spectrum with a brilliant golden blaze as the rainbow of my life spans across the bold blue skies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/10/2009 10:16:00 AM
loved it especially... I am panchromatic, falsely seen as achromatic, by your optical perception when doubtful shades absorb my light. Light & Love
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Date: 8/6/2009 4:33:00 PM
Nicely written. Sara
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Date: 8/6/2009 10:26:00 AM
Thanks you guys. :) I shall be putting more up shortly. Peace and Serenity Crissie x
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Date: 8/6/2009 9:24:00 AM
Beautiful poem Crissiteen, a delight to read. A warm welcome to the Soup>>James
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Date: 8/6/2009 5:52:00 AM
I like this...Dawn defends the spectrum...nice rhythm throughout...great piece...Kris
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Date: 8/6/2009 5:01:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Crissieteen. I wish you the very best with your writing. Love, Carol
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