Kaleidoscope Eyes

~ Picture yourself in a boat on a river sailing along with the moon in your eyes Following dreams found to make your heart quiver with tangerine trees and marmalade skies Somebody calls you, you answer quite slowly counting the words in between all your sighs Seeing her face and it captures you wholly a girl with kaleidoscope eyes Follow her down to a bridge by a fountain with waters so clear as your sprits arise Climbing each step up a marzipan mountain where rocking-horse people eat marshmallow pies Everyone smiles as you drift past the flowers wearing the wings of a young butterfly Tickling tulips on top of the towers that grow so incredibly high Picture yourself on a train in a station where magazines offer a travel surprise As luggage arrives in your imagination with plasticine porters with looking-glass ties Suddenly someone is there at the turnstile your heart skips a beat in the autumn sunrise Dreams all come true as she sends you a smile the girl with kaleidoscope eyes ~
Inspired by the poem Strawberry Fields Forever written by Jennifer Proxenos Her use of Beatles song lyrics woven into her wonderful poem intrigued me. So I thought I would try my own using lyrics from The Beatles, Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds. The first and last lines in each stanza are from their song, in order
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November 27, 2019 at 1:37 PM
This is a masterpiece Chris, the Beatles would be proud of you! I am so sorry I don't often go onto soup and only went on this evening after guests we had left. Of course I don't mind, I'm honored and proud. Hugs, Jennifer.
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November 27, 2019 at 2:10 PM
Thank you Jennifer, I am so happy you liked this. Your poem was such an inspiration to me and I hoped you didn't mind. Thank you again my friend.
There Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 4:58 PM
Love this so much! I have to come back again to enjoy it when I have more time. Also, to check out your inspiration :) Have a great evening!!
Green Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 5:01 PM
Thanks so much my friend. Come back anytime you like. :) I am thrilled you like this one HT.
Sands Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 4:53 PM
Awesome Chris! Creatively written and fun. I enjoyed this :)
Green Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 5:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. I wrote this today and have had the song stuck in my head ever since. :) I appreciate you my friend.
Hamilton Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 4:48 PM
Just the title alone told me what this was, great choice for the title, very distinct line. What a marvelous job you did with this Chris. It's hard enough to craft a song but to do what you did, for me, very impressive, I don't think I could do it. Although I've been working on another Imagine song, been two years...ugh!
Green Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 4:59 PM
I was hoping you'd find this one because I was really curious at what you would think. I am glad you liked this. It was kind of difficult to write to tell the truth. It was fun though.
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November 15, 2019 at 1:56 PM
Chris this is a testimony to your clever writing. Words expertly woven into this classic Beatles song. Fab!! Best..Ron :)
Green Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 4:57 PM
Ah, that's all, no big deal. You'll catch up to them in no time. That was funny John.
Hamilton Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 4:51 PM
Funny one...help me Rhonda must have taken what 5...7mins to put together...Help me Rhonda...help help me Rhonda. Brilliant....who cares they've sold a few hundred million records more than me!
Green Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 2:11 PM
Thanks so much Ron. Just practicing. Maybe I should write one using the lyrics from "Help me Rhonda" : )
Adams Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 1:13 PM
This is so amazing Chris .., who doesn’t like the Beatles? Their words with your words woven together made for a brilliant masterpiece...I loved everything about this my friend ... hugs :)
Green Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 1:34 PM
Thank you Sandy. I am thrilled you found and liked this one. You are right, who doesn't like the Beatles. I appreciate you my friend.
Ligon Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 1:06 PM
Beautiful collaboration. This looks like a fun form to try.
Green Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 1:33 PM
Thanks Juliet. Give it a try sometime, it was fun to write.
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November 15, 2019 at 12:55 PM
WoW! Chris, Jennifer inspired you to write such a well written piece. This was a good tribute to the Beatles song. Your write compelled to go and listen to it. I liked what I heard. Excellent job. Have a great weekend my friend:-) Alexis
Green Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 1:32 PM
Thanks my friend. I am happy you liked my poem and the song.
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November 15, 2019 at 12:33 PM
Your imagery is wonderful, Chris. "Everyone smiles as you drift past the flowers wearing the wings of a young butterfly Tickling tulips on top of the towers that grow so incredibly high"
Green Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 1:32 PM
Thank you so much Caren. I am thrilled you liked it.
Na Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 12:18 PM
Hi Chris. Nicely written. I enjoyed this
Green Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 12:24 PM
Thanks so very much Greg. I am happy you liked it.
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