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Kaleidoscope

I watch my shadows as I walk this earthly path.
Ever changing as the moon follows the sun.

And though I travel far and wide.
I see hands extended in friendship. 

My shadow falls on whispers passing by.
As I walk this Kaleidoscope of highways.

I see you shed a tear, and I wipe it clear.
So the sun can shine for you again.

I see that my world remains beautiful to me.
Even when there are dark clouds around me.

No, I shall not sink to the lowest form.
Moonlight carries me forever forward.

Even with my shadow, part light, part dark.
I'm but a shadow within this earthly realm.




5/ 27/ 2013  9:30pm   Mon.

Copyright © Debbie Duncan | Year Posted 2013

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Faaiqah Abader Date: 3/13/2018 11:14:00 AM Hi Debbie:) I've read a few of your poems since your visit to my page.. you write so beautifully! I really enjoy the imagery that Kaleidoscope takes me through as a reader:) Well written! -F :) Login to Reply

Suzanne C. Goudreau Date: 10/22/2017 8:50:00 AM Wow! An inspiring read Debbie. Loved this poem. Speaks volumes and uplifting as well. A great way to start my day. Ty! Even when there are dark clouds around me....moving. i can relate... Login to Reply

Ken Carroll Date: 8/29/2013 10:54:00 PM Hi Debbie, Thanks for sharing this one with me..I enjoyed reading it. Regards, Ken Login to Reply

Michael Ainsley Date: 6/20/2013 9:08:00 PM Thoughts become things yes? Beleave in a beautiful world and that is what you will find. Beautiful people in a beautiful world even as someone standing right beside you sees something else . It is all mental work to become we are looking for. Likes attract. Login to Reply Debbie Duncan Date: 6/20/2013 10:11:00 PM like attracts like,,, it sure does Michael ;}

Judy Konos Date: 6/17/2013 11:08:00 AM Lovely.....thanks Login to Reply Debbie Duncan Date: 6/17/2013 6:11:00 PM Thank you Judy ;}

Allan Koven Date: 6/17/2013 10:06:00 AM Deep thoughts, eloquently spoken. Can we all be to one another, brothers and sisters from the same realm? Login to Reply Debbie Duncan Date: 6/17/2013 4:16:00 PM Thank you Allen ;}

Timothy Hicks Date: 6/11/2013 11:04:00 AM Great imagery. I enjoyed the mix of kaleidoscopes and shadows. Your last couplet sorta reminded me of a quote I heard awhile back... “We are all visitors to this time, this place. We are just passing through. Our purpose here is to observe, to learn, to grow, to love... and then we return home." - Aboriginal Proverb. Login to Reply

Dan Kearley Date: 5/30/2013 11:57:00 PM Very nice Debbie... I really liked the flow. :o) Login to Reply Debbie Duncan Date: 6/17/2013 6:11:00 PM Thank you Dan ;}

Don Johnson Date: 5/30/2013 2:27:00 AM great poetry babe... Login to Reply Debbie Duncan Date: 5/30/2013 8:49:00 AM I thank you Don ;}

Nato Calubiran Date: 5/29/2013 11:57:00 PM mostly i only watch movies. cant seem to find where to buy books by Stephen King. plus i dont have money im only 20 and dont have a job yet Login to Reply Debbie Duncan Date: 5/30/2013 12:03:00 AM ;}

Poet Tacito Date: 5/29/2013 2:32:00 PM Stunning! "Moonlight carries me forever forward", HELL YEAH! Shine on! :) Login to Reply Debbie Duncan Date: 5/30/2013 8:50:00 AM I thank you ;}

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/29/2013 1:21:00 AM Debbie, I enjoyed how you did this poem. And yes, I lived in Madrid just 5 months in '74. a year to remember!! Login to Reply Debbie Duncan Date: 5/30/2013 9:17:00 AM thank you Andrea ;}

Nato Calubiran Date: 5/28/2013 12:55:00 AM very meaningful and uplifting. enjoyed it very much Login to Reply Debbie Duncan Date: 5/29/2013 11:36:00 PM Thank you ;}