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Juxtaposition

Juxtaposition Living in the grey shadows of ambivalence– Somewhere in between grace and sin – Begging for light yet clinging to darkness Longing to escape into the heavenly yet clutching mortal bones Inspiration’s marriage of opposite hemispheres With reason marching to the metronome of linear time One floats into the realm of timeless boundaries Amid song or silence - Spring-summer solstice dreams the youthful dreams Fall-winter holds prophetic visions In silver laments embraced or golden joy caressed - Far flung fantasy bumps up against Relentless facts in sound and fury Wandering in stale drought of empty entitlement Or settling in the oasis of the abundant gracious Love pulls at the hands of stagnant indifference To open inertia into blooms of compassion Living in between grey whispers of tempest or calm Black and white send scouts named either or, And yet - yeah but - Where choice experiments with a neutral conclusion Of a newborn compromise that takes the best From the first born harvest fruits of juxtaposition 11-23-20 Contest: Juxtaposition Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 11/29/2020 10:56:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the Juxtaposition contest, Sam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/29/2020 4:28:00 PM
Many thanks Anne-Lise :). I thought this was a great theme! Sending you many blessings of the season and hugs!
Date: 11/26/2020 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I need to work on writing juxtaposition poems. I have not done them. You make it look easy. Enjoy your win and day.................
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/29/2020 4:18:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend. Juxtaposition is a fun concept to work with - I really enjoyed the challenge. Can't wait to see what you create. Have a great evening. Sending blessings of the season!
Date: 11/25/2020 10:02:00 PM
Nice write Sam...Congrats on your win.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/29/2020 4:16:00 PM
Thank you so much Carol for your congratulatory message! So grateful! All the best to you as we come into this very special season!
Date: 11/25/2020 10:32:00 AM
Hi Sam, Good use of juxtaposition contained in this well-written write. Congratulations on your win. Have a Happy Thanksgiving:-)Alexis
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/29/2020 4:13:00 PM
Hi Alexis! Loved exploring this theme. Thank you for your feedback and your visit with congratulations. Hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving! It was a different Thanksgiving but one of some very happy surprises. All the best.
Date: 11/25/2020 7:25:00 AM
Glad you got this one over the line, I like your take on the contest Sam... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/29/2020 4:11:00 PM
Me too! I felt so silly at messing up that I made a checklist as a safety precaution! This was such a great theme, SO. It really challenged me to understand the concept of juxtaposition beyond just either or! Thank you for your message, this great theme and your placement. Grateful! Sending you blessings of the season!
Date: 11/24/2020 10:52:00 AM
You play well with opposites in this piece, Sam. A great piece for the contest!!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/24/2020 1:50:00 PM
Thank you so much Newton! It took me awhile to get my head around the idea of juxtaposition - opposites joined in the midline. I so appreciate your feedback! Sending you Thanksgiving blessings. Have a wonderful celebration.

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