Juvenilia - Untitled

I’m a late bloomer! So this was an early attempt
at writing poetry, long before I took classes.
I had small kids and this is what I wrote about them.

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Road Runner down the street
with lots of en-er-gy
riding on his hot wheels
jumping in the air
climbing like a monkey
today he’s free of care

                  ~

Sailor girl go to sleep
close your little eyes
no more talking now sweetheart
not one light left in the skies

                    ~

Perky Pink likes lots of dresses
along with kisses and caresses
with another girl she likes to play
and always has quite a lot to say

~ Entered into the Juvenilia competition on 4/26/2017 ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Coreggia Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 10:30 AM
I love the vivid pictures your painted of your kids Kim, and I bet that parents all over would love to read these colorful lines to their little ones:) Amitiés
Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 7:32 AM
Thanks so much, Anne-Marie!
Williams Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 10:10 AM
I bet your kids loved the verses as you read it to them - Great start Kim. Thanks for sharing your early poems. Love them
Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 7:32 AM
Thank you, Maria!
Green Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 5:23 PM
Such a nice look at some of your earlier work and I must say, you my friend, have obviously had the talent all along. Best wishes in the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 5:25 PM
So sweet for you to say, Chris!
Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 11:07 PM
Very good, Kim! They are all so unique! Best of luck to you in the contest!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 11:08 PM
Never thought i'd enter these "beauties" LOL! At the time I was barely out of poetry diapers.
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