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Juvenile Dreams

Love should feel like a burning flame of fire, fueled by everlasting bonds of trust. And not the promises of a liar; distorting truths in the pursuit of lust. You feel the tears building behind your eyes as your hopes sink, scuttled by betrayal. And realizing what each drop implies, dreams collapse as anxieties prevail. An unbearable pain pierces your heart when truth dispels the illusion of lies. And while doubt and mistrust tear it apart, depression devastates trust as it dies. The empty promises your heart endured were a mix of fantasy and pretense. And juvenile dreams that never matured; spurred a catastrophic set of events. Like a river, destiny sets love's course; and yet, you choose who will be by your side. So, if fate veers and heads toward remorse, change direction to stop the hurt inside.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/15/2018 8:11:00 PM
Strong images of compassion and hope, Emile.
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Date: 5/16/2018 8:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Line, your support and kind words are very much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/21/2017 5:06:00 PM
Hello Emile,this is a powerful poem you wrote. Your message is loud and clear. I've been crying on the inside. So now I rally in hope. Like this poem.
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Date: 3/22/2017 8:10:00 AM
Thanks so much Darlene, for your visit and kind words, Emile.
Date: 3/16/2017 4:31:00 AM
Wow a great poem Emile well written x
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Date: 3/17/2017 12:09:00 PM
Thanks so much Wendy, for your visit and kind words, Emile.
Date: 3/15/2017 9:20:00 PM
Emile, this is so heart felt and well one can feel the tears, well done!
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Date: 3/15/2017 9:33:00 PM
Thanks you Arthur, your kind words of support are most appreciated. Emile.
Date: 3/15/2017 5:53:00 PM
This entire poem has a profound depth that goes beyond understanding of most males. This is certainly impressive and a beautiful piece Emile! You are unique among men and your poetry is a treasure! A FAVE and a magnificent SEVEN! ; )
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Date: 3/15/2017 8:11:00 PM
Connie your words have touched my heart, thank you, Emile.
Date: 3/15/2017 5:39:00 PM
Emile this poem has such powerful messages. So important. Very well written :)
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Date: 3/15/2017 8:11:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, your continued support is most appreciated. Emile.
Date: 3/15/2017 5:28:00 PM
So sad of a life to feel depressed because love.. it should never feel like that it should inspire and encourage... nicely done... ~*
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/15/2017 8:12:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve, I always look forward to reading your comments, Emile.

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