Justice On Broken Hands

She is dancing like a fairy with her long-sequenced gown,

Her long, curly hair swaying as she moves around.

Angels are watching her over the moonlit shadow.

Closed eyes,indulging the melody of playing  tunes. 

A cavalry came in and run her off  on  his horse.

Laid her down to a bed of petals and thorns..---

The shadow started to cruise and moan like a beast.

The heaven cries and mourns for a fate she'd faced.

Her limbs are broken and  can barely stand  on  feet.

And the music keeps on playing, swaying her hair in the wind.

A tiny drop of water wake  her up from an endless nightmare.

The surge stopped moaning and the dawn break his voice.---

Watching a stranger in a very deep sleep,plan was formed in mind.

Vengeance is on her hands,a blazing anger will next explode.

Looking back is  a  breathless and bleeding soul.--


She is wearing her torn long-sequenced gown , stood up strong.

Rain fall down  and washed blood off her hands.

The music keeps playing, the wind blows and pain has gone.



*AiyaH De Torres
WITH THESE HANDS Free Poetry Contest
12/18/2013
Visual 5
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 15, 2014 at 9:31 PM
AIYAH, :) Congrats, with your 'WITH THESE HANDS' winning poem. Have a nice night ~SKAT~
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January 16, 2014 at 11:31 AM
SKAT...thank you..you've been so nice to me ever since i entered here @ PS....Anne,Linda,Nette and YOU...you guyz are the strongest foundation here in PS..thank you for lifting our spirit in every comment that you made.. :)) big hug for you, darlin"!!! Stay sexy and sweet ^__6
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January 3, 2014 at 11:13 PM
Aiyah, , congratulations, in Nette's WITH THESE HANDS contest... LINDA
Torres Avatar
January 6, 2014 at 8:46 AM
Thank you, Linda,,, the sexiest POET!!! ....thank you for believin' in me :))
Onclaud Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 3:54 PM
wow, you made it, ai.. bold and powerful.. cheers to you for a win in my contest!.. huggs
Torres Avatar
January 6, 2014 at 8:45 AM
thank you so much, Nette!!!! ..it's all because of you... :))
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 10:44 PM
this has some powerful imagery in it BIG congrats for your win and it's nice to see a new face here.
Torres Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 7:16 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea!!! you guyz are my inspiration from the very beginning,,,your kind words..your support..thank you so much!!! my gratitude to you all here in Psoup :))
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January 2, 2014 at 2:02 AM
Contest: WITH THESE HANDS / / Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud is retreated!! - CONGRATULATIONS WITH YOUR YOUR BEAUTIFUL WINNING POEM, AIYAH. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :))))
Torres Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 9:06 AM
thank you, Anne.!!! And congratulations, too :').. i really not expected this..that my poem will be recognized..Thanks also to NEtte..for believing in me..thank you so much!!!!
Mehta Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 12:38 AM
Thanks for sharing this fine poem on "With these hands" and congrats on a fine win, Aiyah
Torres Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 9:07 AM
Thank you, Dr. Ram..i really appreciate your comment!! ..
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