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Justice On Broken Hands

She is dancing like a fairy with her long-sequenced gown, Her long, curly hair swaying as she moves around. Angels are watching her over the moonlit shadow. Closed eyes,indulging the melody of playing tunes. A cavalry came in and run her off on his horse. Laid her down to a bed of petals and thorns..--- The shadow started to cruise and moan like a beast. The heaven cries and mourns for a fate she'd faced. Her limbs are broken and can barely stand on feet. And the music keeps on playing, swaying her hair in the wind. A tiny drop of water wake her up from an endless nightmare. The surge stopped moaning and the dawn break his voice.--- Watching a stranger in a very deep sleep,plan was formed in mind. Vengeance is on her hands,a blazing anger will next explode. Looking back is a breathless and bleeding soul.-- She is wearing her torn long-sequenced gown , stood up strong. Rain fall down and washed blood off her hands. The music keeps playing, the wind blows and pain has gone. *AiyaH De Torres WITH THESE HANDS Free Poetry Contest 12/18/2013 Visual 5

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Date: 1/15/2014 9:31:00 PM
AIYAH, :) Congrats, with your 'WITH THESE HANDS' winning poem. Have a nice night ~SKAT~
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/16/2014 11:31:00 AM
SKAT...thank you..you've been so nice to me ever since i entered here @ PS....Anne,Linda,Nette and YOU...you guyz are the strongest foundation here in PS..thank you for lifting our spirit in every comment that you made.. :)) big hug for you, darlin"!!! Stay sexy and sweet ^__6
Date: 1/3/2014 11:13:00 PM
Aiyah, , congratulations, in Nette's WITH THESE HANDS contest... LINDA
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/6/2014 8:46:00 AM
Thank you, Linda,,, the sexiest POET!!! ....thank you for believin' in me :))
Date: 1/3/2014 3:54:00 PM
wow, you made it, ai.. bold and powerful.. cheers to you for a win in my contest!.. huggs
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/6/2014 8:45:00 AM
thank you so much, Nette!!!! ..it's all because of you... :))
Date: 1/2/2014 10:44:00 PM
this has some powerful imagery in it BIG congrats for your win and it's nice to see a new face here.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/3/2014 7:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea!!! you guyz are my inspiration from the very beginning,,,your kind words..your support..thank you so much!!! my gratitude to you all here in Psoup :))
Date: 1/2/2014 2:02:00 AM
Contest: WITH THESE HANDS / / Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud is retreated!! - CONGRATULATIONS WITH YOUR YOUR BEAUTIFUL WINNING POEM, AIYAH. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :))))
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/2/2014 9:06:00 AM
thank you, Anne.!!! And congratulations, too :').. i really not expected this..that my poem will be recognized..Thanks also to NEtte..for believing in me..thank you so much!!!!
Date: 1/2/2014 12:38:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this fine poem on "With these hands" and congrats on a fine win, Aiyah
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/2/2014 9:07:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Ram..i really appreciate your comment!! ..

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