Justice

Marry me, I am falling head over heels for you.
  Go to the dance with me and let the world see what I do.
That shy smile, the twinkle in your emerald eyes.
 I love how smoothly I can feed you these lies.

I'll love you forever, until my last dying breath.
 No, I would never betray you, you're all I have left.
Don't ever hurt me, it would make my heart break.
 After you give it up, I'll be gone before you wake.

Take my hand, show everyone how much you want me.
 I will never do the things that your ex did, just wait and see.
I am different, I promise, Just let me show you honey.
 I'll sit in the locker room and say how easy you are, how funny.

So you say that you have a secret to tell, you're different too?
 Your secret is safe with me, tell me what's so different about you?
I'll listen with eager ears, my eyes only for you, to all others I'm blind.
 Oh, I see, your secret is that you read and can control minds?

Marry me please and be the love of my life.
 Look everyone, don't I have the most beautiful wife?
I love you more and more every single day.
 Maybe I should be more careful with what I think or say.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 7/30/2009 12:24:00 PM
very beautiful poem to write...i love the way you describe...i hope you keep writing more....cause you did a great job with this poem.....Love Faire
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Date: 7/29/2009 6:29:00 PM
That about sums them up huh? Great job dear
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Date: 7/23/2009 2:48:00 PM
You totally wowed me with this one. Fantastic!!!-AA check your soup mail
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Date: 7/23/2009 1:39:00 PM
Aleera, No man worthy of you could or would act in any way that might cause you pain. That said, I'm glad my wife can't read my mind sometimes. Well written dear lady and thank you for your kind review of my stuff. Love, Will
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