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Just Your face whatever

Futile is the sun to a heart in awe (Submitted to whatever poetry contest) Sponsored by: Suzette Richards

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/17/2024 2:27:00 PM

Paghunda, I had to think about this. After all, what does light do for a heart. You have set up a very provoking premise. It's unusual.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2023 10:50:00 AM

You did well in the contest. Congrats

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/15/2023 5:54:00 PM

Dear Paghunda, your opening line is as intriguing as it is beautiful. Amazing emotive verse with potent imagery. Congratulations for your excellent win in Suzette's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Karen Jones

Date: 12/12/2023 4:50:00 PM

Cool first line!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2023 4:16:00 PM

I really like this. I wonder if I mistook how to do this contest because I wrote a much longer one.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 12/13/2023 3:32:00 AM

I truly don't know... It said just write down the first line of the poem, and nothing else. That's how I did it.

Tom Woody

Date: 12/12/2023 4:07:00 PM

Awesome one liner Pag!

Silent One

Date: 12/12/2023 3:25:00 PM

Good choice