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Just Your face whatever

Futile is the sun to a heart in awe


(Submitted to whatever poetry contest) Sponsored by: Suzette Richards

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James Peranteau

July 15, 2026 at 5:40 AM

yet thuh sun dear poet with one lap uv one uv it's fiery tonguez would cauze whut you call "a heart in awe".... it's nevermind....yuh know, your write/right hear; breakfast for thinkerz...ty...much love

Duke Beaufort

January 17, 2024 at 2:27 PM

Paghunda, I had to think about this. After all, what does light do for a heart. You have set up a very provoking premise. It's unusual.

Andrea Dietrich

December 16, 2023 at 10:50 AM

You did well in the contest. Congrats

Susan Ashley

December 15, 2023 at 5:54 PM

Dear Paghunda, your opening line is as intriguing as it is beautiful. Amazing emotive verse with potent imagery. Congratulations for your excellent win in Suzette's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan