Just You and Me

We walk hand in hand down to the stream,
Walking in silence as if lost in a dream;

I can hear the slow babble of the creek,
Happier now than I thought I’d ever be;

Soon our fishing poles lay forgotten on the ground,
Just you and me with no one around;

We lie in the shade watching the clouds,
Telling our dreams and wishes aloud;

The horses draw close and then fade away,
Nothing can spoil this beautiful day.


~Tirzah Conway~

~For the "Write Me Rippling Stream" Contest~    June 1, 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Tirzah. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 9:57 AM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Tirzah
Poet Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 6:55 AM
Beautiful poem...congrats Tirzah on your win.
La France Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 10:21 PM
Congratulations Tirzah on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem~
Sweetheart Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 8:43 PM
Congrats Tirzah on your exciting win in Constance's contest with this splendid write .. enjoy with luv..
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June 1, 2011 at 12:53 PM
This was and is a most beautiful and well written, very creative piece of wonderful poetry. I would give it my vote. this was such a vivid piece of writing. good luck in the contest. I am going to put this in my favorite poems.
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