Just You

Without thought my heart turns toward your voice… You truly see all of me… Your imperfections dear… For Matt's contest

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 1/25/2010 6:54:00 PM

Dear Barbara, I LOVE YOUR raw Emotions in this superb KIMO I see YOUR name on the top of the WINNERS circle Good LUCK LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/25/2010 6:51:00 PM

Lovely poem indeed,,,Charma

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/25/2010 3:16:00 PM

new poem posted

Date: 1/24/2010 6:59:00 PM

The emotion comes through your words in this one. What a testamony to true love. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/24/2010 3:34:00 PM

To love someone in spite of their imperfections can be challenging, but we LNCs already know this, don't we? Great Kim, Barbara, and a terrific entry for Matt's contest. I think he'll like the honesty and simplicity of this lovely message. Love, Carolyn (Hope your move went well)