Just You..

i wrote a poem for many to be true.
u make my heart sing and soon ill be a bird with these things,
these things i call wings and they let me be,
the person that you know.
i smile and laugh and know your there and i soar above the trees.
and speak of thee and for you and i both know, 
that one day we will be the couple overthere,
yes the ones with the hair.
the hair of silver and white you see, in love so carelessly.
we will travel with out fear of death.
for heaven we shall seek,
in your arms i see no harms
the air is clean and pure.
i feel your warmth and tingle inside
for i know your always there.
no matter how far
right there you are.
in my heart you'll be 
ill love thee and you'll love me.
till hell and heaven blend and after that
well we both shall laugh Because we will still be.
in the arms of the one we love though heaven around us has failed.
our love has prevailed.
i love you so and want you to know that i seek your smile dearly.
to kiss you so.
i want you to know 
that my thoughts now are clear
and i see the man that no one else can.
from this i know
i love you so
and one day we will be
invinsable u see.
for fear is nonexistent here 
so please just let us be.
let us be in love with out a care.
my dear it now is clear,
the future we have bestowed.
our lives are complete
ours try to compete 
but our love is strong
we have nothing wrong-
in our connection with one another.
others have envy for what we share,
they do not dare
to even think they compare.
for my dear ill tell you hear
just how much i care.
i think you can plainly see from these lines ive wrote
from the heart i start and dig down and smile
for your love is all i need to live
and now i shall conclude
i end this poem for you i wrote
i bid you adieu. 
or my friend i do love you 
so adieu to you my love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/23/2010 10:19:00 PM
Try to use "you" in place of "u", and Capitalize the I's. :P love you sarararah.
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