Just You

I need you like the flower that needs the
rain and sun 
Like a heart needs to beat 
For a heart to be won 
I need you like a windmill that needs a
breeze to turn 
Like lips need a kiss 
To subside each heart felt yearn 
I need you like the ocean needs a turning
tide 
Like arms need to embrace 
your warmth 
And show the love I can't hide 
I need you like no other 
My heart sings out your name 
My head can't think of anything 
But when will I see you again..........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/5/2010 3:55:00 PM
I need you like the ocean needs a turning tide.....WHAT A GREAT GREAT LINE! Well done!
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Date: 12/7/2009 3:10:00 PM
Great love write. Keep the romance pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/4/2009 8:59:00 AM
Lovely poem, love Simone
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Date: 12/4/2009 6:23:00 AM
Delightful piece Allie >> James
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Date: 12/4/2009 4:42:00 AM
Poetry is a discourse that speaks to the sameness of our humanity ... only the words of our visions are new, for from our feelings rise new metaphors always that say I am. Continue to explore your gift, and may you be blessed
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