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Just Within Reach

The Improbable Geometry of You & Me Darling, you are my missing ampersand. Our togetherness is hand-in-hand & when we travel places far & wide, those long distances too are side-by-side. Even on some remote, outstretched beach There in your heart keep me just within reach. You & I, we, are always parallel: we are, near & far, at infinity. There is no geometry to dispel this improbability – you & me.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2015 4:49:00 PM

a geometrically romantic poem!! Clever one, and I really like it!!

Michael Dom
Date: 5/3/2015 8:38:00 AM

Andrea :-)

Constance La France

Date: 4/27/2015 3:06:00 AM

Michael, oh this is so sweet, lovely and soothing so full of love, 7, congratulations on your win with this beauty and thanks for visiting my poem, my girl and me

Michael Dom
Date: 5/3/2015 8:37:00 AM

Hey Broken, I'm glad to come by when I can. Thank you for your high praise. :-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2015 11:49:00 PM

Michael, Congratulations in John Lawless "Just Within Reach" contest. Always ~ LINDA ~

Michael Dom
Date: 5/3/2015 8:36:00 AM

Linda, thank you for visiting me.

John Lawless

Date: 4/21/2015 10:43:00 AM

Love the continued use of the ampersand throughout the poem. A subtle visual to reinforce the opening line.

Michael Dom
Date: 4/21/2015 11:52:00 AM

Thanks for your visit John Lawless & Cheers!