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Just Who He Can Be

Scared to leave the house,,, ''who did you see?'' heart racing when he screams,,, ''you're cheating on me!!'' cold sweaty hands,,,, ''I've been warned about you!!'' closing my eyes,,,, ''I know what you been up to!!'' Cowering when he shouts,,, ''who's that on your phone??'' turning away,,,, ''I'll find out, you know!!!'' wanting to cry,, I've done nothing wrong, but inside he knew this, he knew all along. Timing me traveling, to shops and to school, ''think im stupid dont ya, you think im a fool!!!'' Rushing around as fast as I can, ending up stuck in traffic, this is really bad. Things getting smashed, all my personal things, 'I'm sorry, I'm sorry,'' the song he always sings. Blames the red mist, or what I'm wearing, anything but him, pretends hes now caring. Give it 2 days, or even a week, he'll hurt me again, for daring to speak. not on my face though, cause people might see, cant show the public, just who he can be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/2/2014 3:07:00 PM
great piece Maxine, really great flow and look forward to seeing more from you, God bless, Gordon
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Date: 6/2/2014 5:45:00 AM
Enjoyed the write. congrats on your poem being featured this week,
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Date: 3/25/2014 4:54:00 PM
This is awesome and definitely a 7 for me! Keep up with the excellent work. You are highly welcome to Poetry soup, a community of mind blowing, soul piercing and intrigue creating poets! I hope to check back on you again. This is really, really so good
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Maxine Jones
Date: 4/11/2014 4:17:00 PM
Awwww thank you soooo much Funom, :) really appreciate your lovely comment, really enjoying poetry :) bless you sweetie xx Max xx
Date: 3/21/2014 5:30:00 PM
Wow Maxine a very powerful poem that I am sure many can relate to - hope its not true, Hugs your friend Jan xxxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/11/2014 4:29:00 PM
Hi Maxine It's so therapeutic this poetry game. Hugs your proud 'mummy' :-)
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Maxine Jones
Date: 4/11/2014 4:14:00 PM
Hiya sweetie, very true but a very long time ago, feel's good to get that out though lol xx max xx
Date: 3/20/2014 9:33:00 AM
Hi Maxine, WOW! What is going on here... I know a person just like this, he's everything wrong, plus he plays the same sorry song... My suggestion, don't give in.... love the write.... xox~ Linda
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Maxine Jones
Date: 4/11/2014 3:59:00 PM
Hey Linda, :) lots of lessons learnt there, it was over 10 years ago, and made me the person I am today, will never walk that path again :) xx max xx
Date: 3/20/2014 9:24:00 AM
† A Lot Of Tragedy In This Man Child's Life ? Stir The Drink Knead The Dough Bates Metel A Baby Doe ? Illsions Delusions Confusions Spinning Amid This Cycle Her Recycled Baby Girl Fluttering Lashes What's It All About Jeremy ? You Know, I Really Dig You Girl, Your Verse I Mean: Keep Brushing ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, John
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Maxine Jones
Date: 4/11/2014 3:57:00 PM
Thank you John, wonderful comment, :) the guy was battling with his own demons and we were a very bad mix, I pray for him to get well, as I have :) bless you John. xx Max xx
Date: 3/19/2014 1:27:00 PM
This very well written Maxine. Hope it is fiction....Tim
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Maxine Jones
Date: 4/11/2014 3:51:00 PM
Thank you Tim, it was a past experience, but happy to say I am in a very loving relationship now, :) my poem 'Tonys Mrs' describes just how happy I am now :) xx Max xx

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