Phyllis Babcock Poet Rhyme

Just Wait Till I'M Done

I  am going to be a mass

I will be firm, plump and round

You will see my form

I am going to be a mass

Around the galaxy I will go

Picking up volume, forming very slow

I am going to be a mass

Just wait  you may see me come

You will see me when I am done

First, I will be hot on fire

But slowly I will cool down

You will see me getting round

I am going to be a mass

All the other planets I will surpass

Just wait till I am done

In several million years to come

I am going to be a mass

A newly formed planet at last.

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Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2011 at 10:12 PM hmmm, now I am coming to ones I already read. Let me skip down and see if the pattern continued!

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2011 at 4:48 PM Hey, do you know science,lady!! Cool way to display that knowledge.This is a really fun one from you. Sometimes you use great fun in your writing which also is comparable to slapstick for it is enjoyed a lot.