Sajdah Al-Riyami Poet Blank verse

Just Too Nice

Don’t you detest the fact
When she creeps around
With a smile on her face
So pleasurably helpful
To Embark
My problems 
On her problems
Without acting as
Propelled
But you just remain
To spot what’s next...
What’s next?

When you fall into the bottom of the pit
And we walk over you

What’s next huh?

When you’re caught in the desert with 8 lives left
And we fly over you on a jetpack

What you going to do next?

When you’re on a roof with your best friend spider on your wall
Its name is Fred right?








..Did I just step on it?

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Jay Loveless June 23, 2009 at 3:30 AM Wait. Dude. Mayeb Its Just Cause I Go To Northern Lehigh. [[Probably]] But Im So Confused. o.0?

John Loving Iii June 11, 2009 at 3:37 PM started out ok but got lost at the name Chesmu. and thank you for making me make my correction. john h loving iii

Robert Davidson June 11, 2009 at 5:59 AM Thanks for your kind comments on a couple of my poems. I like the stepping on it bit. Robert