Just To Be Sure
this great dog
pushes the door open
to his boys' room
its dark
boys away again
now he stands
close to the bed
and takes a breath of his boy
gone now
for too long
still his bed is fragrant
for this friend
waiting home
softly he pads
to the laundry
back to the door
just to be sure
there's no sign
no happy step
no crack of excitement in the air
no boy yet
but soon
deep deep breathing
out he goes
sits on the landing looking out
just to be sure
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