William Kelii Kekaula Poet Limerick

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Poetic Form: Limerick

Inspired: 2024 August 29

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Just Three Men-Its Ago

Hot Shot Susie, had once shot a SNAKE,
Then shot a WOLF HOUND, oven did bake,
One catch she snatched, just won't go,
Tried have it shoved, still was no,
Sly RAT, git, you owe me your LIFE JAKE!

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Paula Goldsmith August 30, 2024 at 9:22 AM I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun day writing away.................... William Kelii Kekaula August 30, 2024 at 12:09 PM Thanks Paula as I try a bit more bite. Aloha William