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Just Three Days

I went away for just three days Though three days were too many It feels like something missing From my heart and From my soul My spirit oh so empty I’m no longer feeling whole Each day I walk beside her And each day she permeates my soul Such peace and calm serenity Transfusing her tranquillity Oh how I miss her so She’s calm just like a mill pond Or with waves that crash ashore Each day unlike another For not one day be the same A newly painted water colour With sky so blue her frame For me to hang upon my heart Her gift for to admire Taking with her all my stress My spirit riseth higher I feel gladdened and content As my soul begins to dance In her flowing chiffon dress I swirl and twirl like a young girl To the music of the sea I am at one I am at peace Heart and soul in harmony for ‘tis me and the deep blue sea
Written 27th August 2021 Contest Your Favourite August 2021 Poem Sponsor Constance la France FIRST PLACE Contest A STRAND 1056 Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Date: 1/21/2022 10:43:00 PM
A very beautiful work. Congratulations!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2022 11:57:00 PM
dear Christuraj thank you, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 9/8/2021 3:06:00 PM
ahhh, so lovely. I love the seashore!! Congrats on your win, ann
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/8/2021 5:15:00 PM
I love it too Andrea and I am so lucky to walk beside it daily. Thank you for your congrats I really appreciate your visit Andrea. with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 9/2/2021 2:22:00 PM
Ann, beautiful and congratulations on your win in my contest ~ love and serenity _ Constance
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/7/2021 10:01:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Constance for my win in your lovely contest. ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/27/2021 11:23:00 PM
There is serenity in this poem. A lovely read. Hugs.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/28/2021 12:00:00 AM
Dear Victor thank you for your kind words my friend. So glad you enjoyed my poem. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/27/2021 11:19:00 AM
Beautiful and peaceful poem Ann. I hope all is well :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/27/2021 11:59:00 PM
Thank you dear Heidi for your lovely words. The sea is so calming and I am really lucky to live close by and be able to stroll along the prom most days. She really does lift my spirit and takes me to a calmer place... I hope you are well Heidi and it is lovely to hear from you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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