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Just Thoughts


Just Thoughts

The Generations

Searching through pages of a photo
album - I found the historic life of me...

 I Could

I could unfold my hearts desire and not
grief, but smile and accept your love...

Mist And Desire

In the mist of desire, I found
love forever....

10/28/2013
Written by Lucilla M. carrillo

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Matthew Anish

Date: 1/6/2014 12:22:00 PM

Sweet words! I hope you are well recovered from your illness. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Christopher Michaels

Date: 11/25/2013 6:51:00 PM

Well written A photo album is a timeline of happiness. it 's show the great time's

Donna Jones

Date: 11/3/2013 7:18:00 AM

Good morning Lucilla... I enjoyed this lovely write this fine day...smile and accept your love...hard to do sometimes....so glad you are happy...:-)

John Posey

Date: 11/3/2013 3:38:00 AM

Dear Lucilla, This is great poetry... It's so sad that so many unopened photo albums hide so many wonderful stories... Jake

Ken Carroll

Date: 10/31/2013 2:07:00 PM

Buen Dia Lucilla, Some wonderful thoughts here.. Ken

Terry O'Leary

Date: 10/30/2013 7:50:00 PM

Emotive... very nice... Terry (& thanks for your kind comments)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/30/2013 5:26:00 PM

Cool poem enjoyed reading it this evening, it's light and romantic. and also thank you for your comments on poetry. cheri

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/30/2013 8:09:00 AM

Very nice feeling of love found in the mist of desire. Artistic view lovely adorned. Loved always, bl

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/29/2013 10:30:00 PM

Beautiful thoughts look back with on past memories. love phyl

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/29/2013 2:50:00 PM

Just thoughts huh? Very wise and beautiful ones for sure! LOVE your new avatar...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/29/2013 12:30:00 PM

... Nice to look back ..... perhaps cry or smile a little... well done,Lucilla. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/28/2013 1:16:00 PM

sweet vignettes of life's true pleasures, lucy... a lilting piece..:) huggs

Sizwe Hlabisa

Date: 10/28/2013 8:20:00 AM

beautiful, absolutely invigorating

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/28/2013 6:35:00 AM

This is a tremendous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, such a dynamic poem! You have delighted me with this verse, Great Work!!