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Just the Thought of It

I cannot fathom a life without you The mere thought fills me with absolute fear Together since our teen years Not sure how well l could do life without you here Life by your side is an honour You are my soul and hearts fuel Yet death will one day separate us Life behaving painfully cruel

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/15/2023 11:48:00 AM

Hello Deb, Yes life is cruel. it will take one spouse away. Darlenex Hugds.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/16/2023 3:43:00 PM

Hello Deb, Your welcome . Hugs. /Darlene/x

Deb M
Date: 11/16/2023 1:25:00 PM

Thankyou Darlene….Debx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/13/2023 12:11:00 AM

Life is cruel. We must all leave this vale of tears. Great sentimental poem. Blessings.

Deb M
Date: 11/14/2023 2:55:00 PM

Thankyou Victor….Cuddles! Debx

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 11/12/2023 12:34:00 AM

That unfortunately is inevitable for all of us, like you, Deb, I try not to go there. I suppose there is truth in the saying," it is better to have loved and lost than never loved at all'. another great write, Deb XX

Deb M
Date: 11/14/2023 2:55:00 PM

Thankyou Shirley….Debx

Terry Flood

Date: 11/11/2023 4:35:00 PM

The sad but inevitable truth of love, life and death, Deb. I’m not remotely religious but I hold on to this notion… If you can love and cherish your memories, perhaps your memories can love and cherish you.

Deb M
Date: 11/13/2023 7:35:00 AM

You never fail to make me laugh Terry!!

Terry Flood
Date: 11/11/2023 4:57:00 PM

Funny face? FUNNY FACE? I’ll have you know, my face is… HILARIOUS. I mean whoever thought a man in his sixties could look like Brad Pitt ;-)

Deb M
Date: 11/11/2023 4:48:00 PM

I am not religious either Terry and that my friend is a lovely notion! There is so much more to you Terry than just a funny face haha!! Debx

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/10/2023 3:07:00 PM

I am certain many will relate to this one Deb. Obviously not something one wants to dwell on but it is good to have some sort of plan. You know, nothing lasts forever. Take care young lady:)

Deb M
Date: 11/11/2023 2:23:00 AM

Indeed l do young man….definitely not a thought one should dwell on for sure….Thankyou…YL x

Ink Empress

Date: 11/10/2023 10:10:00 AM

I can resonate with this poem so deeply, i sometimes think of this, how i can survive without some loved ones, it truly makes me sad. The way you express always leaves a very resonating touch. Felt this sincere poem. Sending you light today and always

Deb M
Date: 11/11/2023 2:22:00 AM

Its a sad thought isn't IE….a thought l don't allow to enter my head too often if l can help it! Love your comments…..Thankyou my new poet friend ….Debx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/10/2023 7:23:00 AM

Spending life with among people we love is a precious gift. Endearing thoughts, my friend.

Deb M
Date: 11/11/2023 1:39:00 AM

Thankyou dear Vijay! Debx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/10/2023 1:45:00 AM

Such is life. I too feel death is not far away. One must just be patient. Blessings.

Deb M
Date: 11/10/2023 2:25:00 AM

Oh victor that saddens me! Cuddles…Debx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/10/2023 12:53:00 AM

They leave a void that can't be filled, I often wonder how people carry on when they lose a soulmate. Tom

Deb M
Date: 11/11/2023 1:39:00 AM

Me too Tom….life can be cruel at times! Thanks my friend…Debx

Bill Baker

Date: 11/9/2023 5:22:00 PM

I like your poem on life without a loved one you've come to see as a permanent fixture in your life. I cannot imagine life without my Sara. God help me are I will die of heartbreak. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Deb. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Hugs, Bill

Deb M
Date: 11/11/2023 1:38:00 AM

Thats how l feel about my husband Bill….lots of us do! Thankyou Bill…Debx