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Just the Thought of It

I cannot fathom a life without you

The mere thought fills me with absolute fear

Together since our teen years

Not sure how well l could do life without you here


Life by your side is an honour

You are my soul and hearts fuel

Yet death will one day separate us

Life behaving painfully cruel

Copyright © Deb M | Year Posted 2023

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 11/15/2023 11:48:00 AM Hello Deb, Yes life is cruel. it will take one spouse away. Darlenex Hugds. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 11/16/2023 3:43:00 PM Hello Deb, Your welcome . Hugs. /Darlene/x Deb M Date: 11/16/2023 1:25:00 PM Thankyou Darlene….Debx

Victor Buhagiar Date: 11/13/2023 12:11:00 AM Life is cruel. We must all leave this vale of tears. Great sentimental poem. Blessings. Login to Reply Deb M Date: 11/14/2023 2:55:00 PM Thankyou Victor….Cuddles! Debx

Shirley Hawkins Date: 11/12/2023 12:34:00 AM That unfortunately is inevitable for all of us, like you, Deb, I try not to go there. I suppose there is truth in the saying," it is better to have loved and lost than never loved at all'. another great write, Deb XX Login to Reply Deb M Date: 11/14/2023 2:55:00 PM Thankyou Shirley….Debx

Terry Flood Date: 11/11/2023 4:35:00 PM The sad but inevitable truth of love, life and death, Deb. I’m not remotely religious but I hold on to this notion… If you can love and cherish your memories, perhaps your memories can love and cherish you. Login to Reply Deb M Date: 11/13/2023 7:35:00 AM You never fail to make me laugh Terry!! Terry Flood Date: 11/11/2023 4:57:00 PM Funny face? FUNNY FACE? I’ll have you know, my face is… HILARIOUS. I mean whoever thought a man in his sixties could look like Brad Pitt ;-) Deb M Date: 11/11/2023 4:48:00 PM I am not religious either Terry and that my friend is a lovely notion! There is so much more to you Terry than just a funny face haha!! Debx

Daniel Turner Date: 11/10/2023 3:07:00 PM I am certain many will relate to this one Deb. Obviously not something one wants to dwell on but it is good to have some sort of plan. You know, nothing lasts forever. Take care young lady:) Login to Reply Deb M Date: 11/11/2023 2:23:00 AM Indeed l do young man….definitely not a thought one should dwell on for sure….Thankyou…YL x

Ink Empress Date: 11/10/2023 10:10:00 AM I can resonate with this poem so deeply, i sometimes think of this, how i can survive without some loved ones, it truly makes me sad. The way you express always leaves a very resonating touch. Felt this sincere poem. Sending you light today and always Login to Reply Deb M Date: 11/11/2023 2:22:00 AM Its a sad thought isn't IE….a thought l don't allow to enter my head too often if l can help it! Love your comments…..Thankyou my new poet friend ….Debx

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/10/2023 7:23:00 AM Spending life with among people we love is a precious gift. Endearing thoughts, my friend. Login to Reply Deb M Date: 11/11/2023 1:39:00 AM Thankyou dear Vijay! Debx

Victor Buhagiar Date: 11/10/2023 1:45:00 AM Such is life. I too feel death is not far away. One must just be patient. Blessings. Login to Reply Deb M Date: 11/10/2023 2:25:00 AM Oh victor that saddens me! Cuddles…Debx

Tom Cunningham Date: 11/10/2023 12:53:00 AM They leave a void that can't be filled, I often wonder how people carry on when they lose a soulmate. Tom Login to Reply Deb M Date: 11/11/2023 1:39:00 AM Me too Tom….life can be cruel at times! Thanks my friend…Debx

Bill Baker Date: 11/9/2023 5:22:00 PM I like your poem on life without a loved one you've come to see as a permanent fixture in your life. I cannot imagine life without my Sara. God help me are I will die of heartbreak. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Deb. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Hugs, Bill Login to Reply Deb M Date: 11/11/2023 1:38:00 AM Thats how l feel about my husband Bill….lots of us do! Thankyou Bill…Debx