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Just Ten Words

Heated stones
on knotted spine
Pain with Pleasure
Relief divine.   


Penned by Seren Roberts on April 8th 2014

Contest:  Just  Ten Words

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Sara Kendrick

April 14, 2014 at 7:46 AM

I am sure that warmth gives blessed relief..Congrats..Sara

Seren Roberts

April 15, 2014 at 7:24 PM

Hot stones are great Sara, you should try it someday ...Seren

Aiyah Torres

April 14, 2014 at 7:09 AM

So impressive!! Nice take in 10 words poem!! ..Congratulations, Seren!! :O)))

Seren Roberts

April 15, 2014 at 7:24 PM

Thank you AiyaH ....Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 14, 2014 at 1:10 AM

brilliant take on the theme of stones. congrats on a fine win, seren

Seren Roberts

April 15, 2014 at 7:26 PM

Thank you Ram ....Seren

Skat A

April 13, 2014 at 8:20 PM

lovely win Seren...SKAT

Seren Roberts

April 15, 2014 at 7:27 PM

Thanks Skat ...Seren

Andrea Dietrich

April 13, 2014 at 4:27 PM

I saw this one just the other day and was so impressed by it Way to go with your top win. For me it's truly top notch. congrats, Seren!

Seren Roberts

April 15, 2014 at 7:27 PM

Thanks again Andrea ....Seren

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 13, 2014 at 2:22 PM

Awesome poetry Seren ! Congrats on great win !

Seren Roberts

April 15, 2014 at 7:29 PM

Thank you for your congrats ...Seren

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 13, 2014 at 1:13 PM

- A poem about STONES in just 10 words - not easy - but it was a lot of good poems nevertheless - Congratulations on your winning poem, Seren !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Seren Roberts

April 15, 2014 at 7:30 PM

Anne-Lisa thanks for stopping by and commenting ...Seren