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Heated stones on knotted spine Pain with Pleasure Relief divine. Penned by Seren Roberts on April 8th 2014 Contest: Just Ten Words

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Date: 4/14/2014 7:46:00 AM
I am sure that warmth gives blessed relief..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 4/15/2014 7:24:00 PM
Hot stones are great Sara, you should try it someday ...Seren
Date: 4/14/2014 7:09:00 AM
So impressive!! Nice take in 10 words poem!! ..Congratulations, Seren!! :O)))
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Date: 4/15/2014 7:24:00 PM
Thank you AiyaH ....Seren
Date: 4/14/2014 1:10:00 AM
brilliant take on the theme of stones. congrats on a fine win, seren
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Date: 4/15/2014 7:26:00 PM
Thank you Ram ....Seren
Date: 4/13/2014 8:20:00 PM
lovely win Seren...SKAT
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Date: 4/15/2014 7:27:00 PM
Thanks Skat ...Seren
Date: 4/13/2014 4:27:00 PM
I saw this one just the other day and was so impressed by it Way to go with your top win. For me it's truly top notch. congrats, Seren!
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Date: 4/15/2014 7:27:00 PM
Thanks again Andrea ....Seren
Date: 4/13/2014 2:22:00 PM
Awesome poetry Seren ! Congrats on great win !
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Date: 4/15/2014 7:29:00 PM
Thank you for your congrats ...Seren
Date: 4/13/2014 1:13:00 PM
- A poem about STONES in just 10 words - not easy - but it was a lot of good poems nevertheless - Congratulations on your winning poem, Seren !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/15/2014 7:30:00 PM
Anne-Lisa thanks for stopping by and commenting ...Seren
Date: 4/13/2014 1:01:00 PM
This is so good! love it. // congrats. // paul
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Date: 4/15/2014 7:30:00 PM
Thanks Paul ....Seren
Date: 4/13/2014 12:54:00 PM
Congrat Serene...probably my favorite
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Date: 4/15/2014 7:31:00 PM
Thank you David, glad you enjoyed it ...Seren
Date: 4/13/2014 12:54:00 PM
Congratulations Selene... Verlena
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Date: 4/13/2014 11:33:00 AM
wow. one of the very best I have seen in her contest. I expect this somewhere in the top three!!!
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Date: 4/8/2014 4:32:00 PM
massage.. spa... wow!! this what imagine,,, :) :) relaxing write.. :)
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Date: 4/8/2014 8:06:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by....Seren
Date: 4/8/2014 3:34:00 PM
you've done an amazing job with just ten words! love it!
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Date: 4/8/2014 8:07:00 PM
Hi Ilene glad you liked my ten words.......thanks for stopping by ....Seren

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