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Just Ten Words

Heart beats fast,
         bouquet of red roses.
               I'm in love.

cute loveblank verse

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Lynn Marie

March 29, 2017 at 3:07 PM

Is anything more beautiful ...I think not. Lovely Aiyah :-) blessings, lynnxxx

Mel Merrill

April 9, 2014 at 9:22 AM

AiyaH, a clever bit of poetry. And now I know: a bouquet of red roses. How about two dozen long-stem? Seriously, I like it. It's simple, but fun. Ta Ta ;) mel

Aiyah Torres

April 9, 2014 at 12:04 PM

Hey Mel.. aaah.. thaNk you for this delightful comment!!! ... 2 doz of long stems???... wait for the delivery knock on your door.. lol... :O)) you're so sweet!

Poet Destroyer A

April 9, 2014 at 9:13 AM

a sweet write in just 10 words.... Linda

Poet Destroyer A

April 9, 2014 at 11:03 AM

:) you are the best :)

Aiyah Torres

April 9, 2014 at 10:59 AM

THank yOu , PD dear!!! :O)) you are sweeter than these 10 words.. and thousands words aren't enough to create a piece for the only one PD!!! ,,, Labyuh!!! :O))

Sara Kendrick

April 9, 2014 at 8:13 AM

Ahh!! Impressive..Sara

Aiyah Torres

April 9, 2014 at 8:26 AM

my dearest ,Sara!!.. Thank you for this kind visit! ^_^ God bless you all these days... :O)

Paul Callus

April 8, 2014 at 3:47 PM

Wow!...and next ring and proposal !! enjoyed :) // paul

Aiyah Torres

April 8, 2014 at 3:55 PM

Wapow!!! ...THanks again my dearest friend!!! :O))

Tim Smith

April 8, 2014 at 1:38 PM

You will be rich if you get a 24 carat diamond...a really nice size is 1.5

Aiyah Torres

April 8, 2014 at 1:43 PM

OH Tim thanks for an advice... :"))

Nette Onclaud

April 8, 2014 at 1:38 PM

ohhh, thank you aiyah.. hope you'll be resting for the araw ng kagitingan holiday!.. huggs

Aiyah Torres

April 8, 2014 at 1:49 PM

don't worry.. that's gonna be DP.. lol.. :"))

Aiyah Torres

April 8, 2014 at 1:43 PM

I do hope so, nette... but the word "rest" isn't famous here in our company... I just had a flu last weekend, and hoping I could rest for more days, but too sad... I need to go back to work and earn, you know?.. Thank you for this wonderful visit!! .:")) labyaH!! ^__^

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