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Just Ten Words

Heart beats fast, bouquet of red roses. I'm in love.

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Lynn Marie

Date: 3/29/2017 3:07:00 PM

Is anything more beautiful ...I think not. Lovely Aiyah :-) blessings, lynnxxx

Mel Merrill

Date: 4/9/2014 9:22:00 AM

AiyaH, a clever bit of poetry. And now I know: a bouquet of red roses. How about two dozen long-stem? Seriously, I like it. It's simple, but fun. Ta Ta ;) mel

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/9/2014 12:04:00 PM

Hey Mel.. aaah.. thaNk you for this delightful comment!!! ... 2 doz of long stems???... wait for the delivery knock on your door.. lol... :O)) you're so sweet!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/9/2014 9:13:00 AM

a sweet write in just 10 words.... Linda

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 4/9/2014 11:03:00 AM

:) you are the best :)

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/9/2014 10:59:00 AM

THank yOu , PD dear!!! :O)) you are sweeter than these 10 words.. and thousands words aren't enough to create a piece for the only one PD!!! ,,, Labyuh!!! :O))

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/9/2014 8:13:00 AM

Ahh!! Impressive..Sara

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/9/2014 8:26:00 AM

my dearest ,Sara!!.. Thank you for this kind visit! ^_^ God bless you all these days... :O)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/8/2014 3:47:00 PM

Wow!...and next ring and proposal !! enjoyed :) // paul

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/8/2014 3:55:00 PM

Wapow!!! ...THanks again my dearest friend!!! :O))

Tim Smith

Date: 4/8/2014 1:38:00 PM

You will be rich if you get a 24 carat diamond...a really nice size is 1.5

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/8/2014 1:43:00 PM

OH Tim thanks for an advice... :"))

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/8/2014 1:38:00 PM

ohhh, thank you aiyah.. hope you'll be resting for the araw ng kagitingan holiday!.. huggs

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/8/2014 1:49:00 PM

don't worry.. that's gonna be DP.. lol.. :"))

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/8/2014 1:43:00 PM

I do hope so, nette... but the word "rest" isn't famous here in our company... I just had a flu last weekend, and hoping I could rest for more days, but too sad... I need to go back to work and earn, you know?.. Thank you for this wonderful visit!! .:")) labyaH!! ^__^