Just Tell Me What To Do

Just Tell Me What to Do

And, I, on a great schooner,
will sail away from you.
To another shore where 
freedom is.

To be loved for exactly who
I am.
For I am full of romp and play.

Adieux, will see you some
other day.



August 15, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 8/19/2019 11:59:00 PM
A playful carefree write, a wish to be free of the shackles of this world and a hope and wish to find another land where with someone who understands and loves you, you will find freedom and peace - quite the philosopher you are Panagiota mou! A fa. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/20/2019 12:26:00 AM
Me? A philosopher! No!I heave that to our great Plato,Aristotle and Socrates. All of whom I studied extensively at Loyola University and many others. Actually, I am a free spirit right now and have been since age 18. I just cannot be owned.))) Good week to you. Panagiota.
Date: 8/15/2019 11:53:00 PM
G'day Panagiota … one door shuts, another one opens so they say - thank you Panagiota - Lindsay
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/16/2019 9:29:00 AM
One of my favorite sayings, thank you! Panagiota xx
Date: 8/15/2019 8:12:00 PM
Just love the premise of this poem, Panagiota… Mostly jealous though, as I was raised to say 'Yes' to everyone and to be perfectly obedient... and it got me absolutely nowhere!!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/15/2019 8:47:00 PM
I like it as well. You and I were raised alike. At 18' I said WHOA to all and became a rebel with a cause,)) my identity and authenticity. Best thing I ever did,.... I can't breathe without my freedom. But I paid a price for it..In a positive way! PR
Date: 8/15/2019 3:56:00 PM
I love your unexpected turn and can definitely relate from past experiences. Well done, Panagiota.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/15/2019 4:49:00 PM
Line, please read my comments about you in Vitay's Box below. Glad you can relate to this one. And thanks for your input. Love you. Panagiota xx
Date: 8/15/2019 2:49:00 PM
WOW! Your song is rhythm, Panagiota..though the message is bittersweet as life sometimes tends to be. So well written!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/15/2019 4:42:00 PM
Thank you. Oh great poet for your comments as a a true friend here. I can't express how much I appreciate you. Line, in the comment above is very Much the same. A consistent friend, bothnof you! Blessings in my life. Love, Panagiota.
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