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Just Stating the Obvious

I breathe in existence- in this great world, all the living and all the dead; and all the pitfalls swirled: I breathe in existence- and vast beauty, all the forests green and seas blue; earth's balance my duty: I breathe in existence- and the pretty, all of the birds and all the fish; in countries and city: I breathe in existence- and all the pets, all of the dogs and all the cats; that each never forgets: I breathe in existence- and the sweet love, all the bad and all of the true; all the loved gone above: I breathe in existence- and all of the words, all the books and dictionaries; all mine that fly like birds: I breathe in existence- all the fame, all the wins and the failed poems; I penned in my own name: I breath in existence- this world of hate, all the pain and serenity; and peace I will create. ___________________ April 25, 2021 Poetry/Rhyme/Just Stating The Obvious Copyright Protected, ID 04-1349-452-25 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Just Stating The Obvious sponsor, Brother Jacob, Judged, 05/18/2021 First Place

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Date: 5/20/2021 3:38:00 PM
A beautiful write, Constance! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Constance La France
Date: 5/21/2021 10:36:00 AM
Kim, thanks for the compliment and the congrats, love _Constance
Date: 5/19/2021 10:13:00 PM
Impeccable, as always, Constance! Congrats on your win!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/20/2021 2:30:00 PM
Seeker, thanks for the compliment and congrats, peace _Constance
Date: 5/18/2021 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brother Jacob's contest, Constance, great repeated verse.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/18/2021 1:41:00 PM
Eve, thanks for the congratulations, appreciate, love _Constance
Date: 5/18/2021 9:49:00 AM
That’s so beautiful Constance, lovely words. Congratulations on your worthy win… Belle
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Constance La France
Date: 5/18/2021 1:41:00 PM
Belle, thanks for the compliment and congratulations, peace _Belle
Date: 4/25/2021 11:05:00 AM
Hello Constance, wow! A very deep pondering poem. Love Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/25/2021 3:25:00 PM
Hello Constance. I hope th\t you had a good weekend. Enjoy your evening .Love.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/25/2021 12:58:00 PM
Darlene, thanks for the visit a comment, love _Constance

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