Just Stating the Obvious

 
I breathe in existence- in this great world, all the living and all the dead; and all the pitfalls swirled: I breathe in existence- and vast beauty, all the forests green and seas blue; earth's balance my duty: I breathe in existence- and the pretty, all of the birds and all the fish; in countries and city: I breathe in existence- and all the pets, all of the dogs and all the cats; that each never forgets: I breathe in existence- and the sweet love, all the bad and all of the true; all the loved gone above: I breathe in existence- and all of the words, all the books and dictionaries; all mine that fly like birds: I breathe in existence- all the fame, all the wins and the failed poems; I penned in my own name: I breath in existence- this world of hate, all the pain and serenity; and peace I will create. ___________________ April 25, 2021 Poetry/Rhyme/Just Stating The Obvious Copyright Protected, ID 04-1349-452-25 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Just Stating The Obvious sponsor, Brother Jacob, Judged, 05/18/2021 First Place
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Merryman Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 3:38 PM
A beautiful write, Constance! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
La France Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 10:36 AM
Kim, thanks for the compliment and the congrats, love _Constance
Seeker Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 10:13 PM
Impeccable, as always, Constance! Congrats on your win!
La France Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 2:30 PM
Seeker, thanks for the compliment and congrats, peace _Constance
Roper Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 11:34 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brother Jacob's contest, Constance, great repeated verse.
La France Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Eve, thanks for the congratulations, appreciate, love _Constance
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May 18, 2021 at 9:49 AM
That’s so beautiful Constance, lovely words. Congratulations on your worthy win… Belle
La France Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Belle, thanks for the compliment and congratulations, peace _Belle
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April 25, 2021 at 11:05 AM
Hello Constance, wow! A very deep pondering poem. Love Darlene
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April 25, 2021 at 3:25 PM
Hello Constance. I hope th\t you had a good weekend. Enjoy your evening .Love.
La France Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 12:58 PM
Darlene, thanks for the visit a comment, love _Constance
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