"just Sounds"

The wall is too high
                    I can't see, but only hear
                                                 the laughter and cries..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 10, 2012 at 8:57 PM
wow.. you mixed these emotions as the only noise that hits you right in the heart. I think I have to say this one impressed me beyond compare. I built my love right now around my granddaughter.. I'm all ears when it comes to laughter and her cries... xox~PD
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September 5, 2010 at 12:36 PM
Could be almost anything.. I like this mystery... interesting ... and thought provoking piece..luv.. awesome as always..
Hales Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 2:31 AM
great meanings sarah x
Neels Avatar
September 4, 2010 at 8:43 AM
So vivid and sometimes the sounds is what matters most.. Love this piece as well Michael.. Luv Wilma
Mehta Avatar
September 4, 2010 at 8:17 AM
A very expressive haiku with nice images, Michael
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September 4, 2010 at 7:22 AM
Enjoyed reading this one for it brought questions to my mind...What wall? Emotional or real wall? Why the crys? Glad I chose this one to read this morning..Thank you for gracing my pages with your presence...Sara
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September 4, 2010 at 7:09 AM
I like this and can relate very well, it has a sense of loneliness to it, well done Michael.. love constance
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