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Just Sixty Four

One hundred and eighty words you say For to write a poem and make your day Attempting a task for to do as you ask As striving towards your criteria to meet For me that would be such a massive feat My poems can be too long your attention span I’d lose So I’ll submit this little bit and hope it’s mine you choose Written 11th September 2019 Contest: Any Poem You Want to Write 180 words or less Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/13/2019 8:58:00 AM

Change chose to choose and this will be perfect. I tend to be verbose and I didn’t submit one soon enough. Good luck in the contest.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/13/2019 10:56:00 AM

Ooops - many thanks Richard for your comments, nice to meet you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/13/2019 3:34:00 AM

Lovely little piece Ann, Really enjoyed it looking out on the sunshine up here this morning. Blessings, Gordon

Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/13/2019 4:33:00 AM

Good morning Gordon, so glad you enjoyed it and I am pleased to hear you have a lovely sunny morning in Scotland. The weekend is also looking good, so fingers crossed. Hoping you are well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/12/2019 11:07:00 AM

Lovely little rhyme going on here! Simply darling!;)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/13/2019 4:38:00 AM

Hello Brenda, thank you so much for your sweet comments and I am so pleased you enjoyed my little ditty, haha... With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/12/2019 7:12:00 AM

A fun poem to start my day..I liked the leisurely tone--great ending, Ann.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/13/2019 4:30:00 AM

Hahaha, so glad you enjoyed it Vijay and thank you so much for your welcome support. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/11/2019 9:27:00 PM

Lol! I LOVE IT. Too funny. A winner for me! Good luck in the contest :), xomo!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/12/2019 2:43:00 AM

Great to hear from you Maureen and so pleased you loved my little bit of nonsense, haha. Hope all is well with you, with kindest thoughts Ann xx