Ann Gilmour Poet Rhyme

Just Sixty Four

One hundred and eighty words you say
For to write a poem and make your day
Attempting a task for to do as you ask
As striving towards your criteria to meet
For me that would be such a massive feat
My poems can be too long 
your attention span I’d lose
So I’ll submit
this little bit
and hope it’s mine you choose


Written 11th September 2019
Contest: Any Poem You Want to Write 180 words or less
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Richard Lamoureux September 13, 2019 at 8:58 AM Change chose to choose and this will be perfect. I tend to be verbose and I didn’t submit one soon enough. Good luck in the contest. Ann Gilmour September 13, 2019 at 10:56 AM Ooops - many thanks Richard for your comments, nice to meet you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Gordon Mcconnell September 13, 2019 at 3:34 AM Lovely little piece Ann, Really enjoyed it looking out on the sunshine up here this morning. Blessings, Gordon Ann Gilmour September 13, 2019 at 4:33 AM Good morning Gordon, so glad you enjoyed it and I am pleased to hear you have a lovely sunny morning in Scotland. The weekend is also looking good, so fingers crossed. Hoping you are well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Brenda Chiri September 12, 2019 at 11:07 AM Lovely little rhyme going on here! Simply darling!;) Ann Gilmour September 13, 2019 at 4:38 AM Hello Brenda, thank you so much for your sweet comments and I am so pleased you enjoyed my little ditty, haha... With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit September 12, 2019 at 7:12 AM A fun poem to start my day..I liked the leisurely tone--great ending, Ann. Ann Gilmour September 13, 2019 at 4:30 AM Hahaha, so glad you enjoyed it Vijay and thank you so much for your welcome support. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 11, 2019 at 9:27 PM Lol! I LOVE IT. Too funny. A winner for me! Good luck in the contest :), xomo! Ann Gilmour September 12, 2019 at 2:43 AM Great to hear from you Maureen and so pleased you loved my little bit of nonsense, haha. Hope all is well with you, with kindest thoughts Ann xx