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Just Sail

Lay me down Upon soft blue water I surrender Close my eyes As I drown in you I well remember All those hands That eluded me As I went under The sting of salt That filled my heart That cold November No matter now I’ve learned to swim The toxic sea The bottomless Of loneliness Unveiled to me So, lay me down Upon soft blue water I’ll surrender But not enough To lose myself To a cold November

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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