Just Read

please stop counting                                                                                                      
my syllables and read the
damn poem already
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Segal Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 1:53 PM
LOL!!! To laugh is better than any doctors prescription! Thank you, love Simone
Neshat Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 12:07 AM
good one!
Gumbo Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 5:55 AM
lol!!! awesome!!! For a girl who is OCD, ADD, ABC and XYZ, I count by far too much... LOVED this!
Strand Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 8:15 AM
Well said Brian.Rgds Brian
Crane Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 12:12 PM
LOL. Thanks for the smile, it was needed. Kat x
Peñaranda Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 7:52 AM
and this is even better...love this! _chily_
i love this!!!! it freakin brilliant
Atanacio Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 5:24 AM
lol okay okay...LOL this was amusingly good
Higgins Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 5:16 AM
LOL..LOL...that is a classic my friend.. frig the form just read the darn thing..loved it.
Chircop Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 11:07 PM
and brian i read without counting-but please dont ever count mine;-),give us more to read my friend----charma
Tugaff Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 10:46 PM
Friend Brian, never mind the counting, what is important is the idea, the message. Ernilando
Bird Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 8:19 PM
I absolutely love your tell them like it is attitude, it isn't about how long the poetry it is the meaning underneath. So well said!
Devonshire Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 4:21 PM
Amen to that, Brian. I only have 10 fingers, so if I write long lines with meter, I have to resort to counting toes. As I said in an early poem, "Meter petered out with confined rhyme and cursed verse." "Just read" is good advice!
Chircop Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 3:12 PM
good one;-)
Hudson Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 3:05 PM
Priceless!-AA
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