Just Peachy

Across a crowded,
Room,
You were there,
Hearts,
Pounding,
Taste buds 
Dancing
Luscious,
Your pink,
Flesh,
Desirably calling, 
Eat me!
Passion moved,
Time stood still,
Sweet,
Charmed,
Love 
Empowered,
My peach,
Darling,
You were,
Gone.

22/02/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Grimm Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 4:40 PM
Nice! I could almost taste the peaches.
Makama Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 9:19 AM
You have pointed out the message so clear, poetic, original and with a fantastic imagery expression. Thank you for this lovely share friend. This is definitely a star content.
Rycroft Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 1:41 PM
Tha xnk you Funom
Ball Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 5:46 AM
Yum I do love the taste of a good cold peach in summer. I keep mine in the fridge. Nicely done Wendy. God Bless, JB
Rycroft Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 9:27 AM
Thank you Judy x
Kendrick Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 6:09 AM
Well, I am assuming this is about a person and not a peach but then maybe a peach..I do love the flavor of fresh peaches in the summer..They are delicious at least the old varities from the past..The new varities are not as good..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Rycroft Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 7:35 AM
Thank you Sara yes there is a double message x
Andresen Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 7:52 AM
- ... Juicy ... romantic ... well done, Wendy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rycroft Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Thank you Sunshine x
Smith Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 7:46 PM
Tasty Wendy, desirable delicious...
Rycroft Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 7:02 AM
Thank you Charlin x
Turner Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 7:43 PM
I love fresh peaches! Your poem made my mouth water, Mrs Wendy:)
Rycroft Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 7:55 AM
Thank you Daniel x
Green Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 5:41 PM
This was a juicy poem. :) Fun one Wendy
Rycroft Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 5:43 PM
Thanks Chris just added the picture x cheers
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