Just Peachy

Across a crowded,
Room,
You were there,
Hearts,
Pounding,
Taste buds 
Dancing
Luscious,
Your pink,
Flesh,
Desirably calling, 
Eat me!
Passion moved,
Time stood still,
Sweet,
Charmed,
Love 
Empowered,
My peach,
Darling,
You were,
Gone.

22/02/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 8/4/2020 4:40:00 PM
Nice! I could almost taste the peaches.
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Date: 3/5/2017 9:19:00 AM
You have pointed out the message so clear, poetic, original and with a fantastic imagery expression. Thank you for this lovely share friend. This is definitely a star content.
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 3/5/2017 1:41:00 PM
Tha xnk you Funom
Date: 3/4/2017 5:46:00 AM
Yum I do love the taste of a good cold peach in summer. I keep mine in the fridge. Nicely done Wendy. God Bless, JB
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 3/4/2017 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Judy x
Date: 2/25/2017 6:09:00 AM
Well, I am assuming this is about a person and not a peach but then maybe a peach..I do love the flavor of fresh peaches in the summer..They are delicious at least the old varities from the past..The new varities are not as good..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/25/2017 7:35:00 AM
Thank you Sara yes there is a double message x
Date: 2/23/2017 7:52:00 AM
- ... Juicy ... romantic ... well done, Wendy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/23/2017 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine x
Date: 2/22/2017 7:46:00 PM
Tasty Wendy, desirable delicious...
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/23/2017 7:02:00 AM
Thank you Charlin x
Date: 2/22/2017 7:43:00 PM
I love fresh peaches! Your poem made my mouth water, Mrs Wendy:)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/23/2017 7:55:00 AM
Thank you Daniel x
Date: 2/22/2017 5:41:00 PM
This was a juicy poem. :) Fun one Wendy
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/22/2017 5:43:00 PM
Thanks Chris just added the picture x cheers
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