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Just Peachy

Across a crowded, Room, You were there, Hearts, Pounding, Taste buds Dancing Luscious, Your pink, Flesh, Desirably calling, Eat me! Passion moved, Time stood still, Sweet, Charmed, Love Empowered, My peach, Darling, You were, Gone. 22/02/2017

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David Grimm

Date: 8/4/2020 4:40:00 PM

Nice! I could almost taste the peaches.

Funom Makama

Date: 3/5/2017 9:19:00 AM

You have pointed out the message so clear, poetic, original and with a fantastic imagery expression. Thank you for this lovely share friend. This is definitely a star content.

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 3/5/2017 1:41:00 PM

Tha xnk you Funom

Judy Ball

Date: 3/4/2017 5:46:00 AM

Yum I do love the taste of a good cold peach in summer. I keep mine in the fridge. Nicely done Wendy. God Bless, JB

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 3/4/2017 9:27:00 AM

Thank you Judy x

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/25/2017 6:09:00 AM

Well, I am assuming this is about a person and not a peach but then maybe a peach..I do love the flavor of fresh peaches in the summer..They are delicious at least the old varities from the past..The new varities are not as good..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/25/2017 7:35:00 AM

Thank you Sara yes there is a double message x