Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

Just Passing Time

The world keeps turning, though not mine

Each passing day just brings more pain,

Every waking moment, just passing time

Until I meet my love again.










Entry for
Four Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France.
27/7/2020.Placed=3rd.

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Christopher Flaherty August 14, 2020 at 12:51 PM Both your time , word's and sentiment are well spent and so eloquently delivered Gary Smith August 14, 2020 at 2:29 PM Thank you Christopher. :)

Constance La France July 29, 2020 at 5:25 PM Gary, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest _Constance Gary Smith July 30, 2020 at 5:41 AM Thank you Constance. :)

Andrea Dietrich July 29, 2020 at 1:43 PM I really really like this one!! Congrats for the win. Gary Smith July 29, 2020 at 2:14 PM Thank you Andrea. :)

Line Gauthier July 28, 2020 at 6:20 PM Love the emotion here, Gary ~ Gary Smith July 29, 2020 at 12:37 AM Thank you Line. :)

Aditi Mishra July 28, 2020 at 1:33 PM Sad but powerful muse Gary. Congratulations on your win! Gary Smith July 28, 2020 at 2:03 PM Thank you Aditi. :)

Carolyn Devonshire July 28, 2020 at 8:49 AM Profoundly sad, Gary. I can relate to the feelings you describe so well. Congratulations on your win! Gary Smith July 28, 2020 at 8:53 AM Thank you Carolyn. :)

Jenna Logan July 28, 2020 at 4:48 AM Congratulations on your sorrowful, but worthy contest honors, Gary. Gary Smith July 28, 2020 at 5:06 AM Thank you Jenna. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen July 28, 2020 at 2:52 AM - Four sad lines ... great written, Gary ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Gary Smith July 28, 2020 at 3:54 AM Thank you Anne-Lise. :)

Heidi Sands July 27, 2020 at 5:28 AM I understand this. Well done Gary :) Gary Smith July 27, 2020 at 5:28 AM Thank you Heidi. :)