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Just Passing Time

The world keeps turning, though not mine Each passing day just brings more pain, Every waking moment, just passing time Until I meet my love again. Entry for Four Lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France. 27/7/2020.Placed=3rd.

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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 8/14/2020 12:51:00 PM
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Both your time , word's and sentiment are well spent and so eloquently delivered
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/14/2020 2:29:00 PM
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Thank you Christopher. :)
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Constance La France
Date: 7/29/2020 5:25:00 PM
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Gary, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest _Constance
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/30/2020 5:41:00 AM
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Thank you Constance. :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/29/2020 1:43:00 PM
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I really really like this one!! Congrats for the win.
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/29/2020 2:14:00 PM
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Thank you Andrea. :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/28/2020 6:20:00 PM
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Love the emotion here, Gary ~
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/29/2020 12:37:00 AM
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Thank you Line. :)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/28/2020 1:33:00 PM
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Sad but powerful muse Gary. Congratulations on your win!
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/28/2020 2:03:00 PM
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Thank you Aditi. :)
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 7/28/2020 8:49:00 AM
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Profoundly sad, Gary. I can relate to the feelings you describe so well. Congratulations on your win!
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/28/2020 8:53:00 AM
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Thank you Carolyn. :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/28/2020 4:48:00 AM
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Congratulations on your sorrowful, but worthy contest honors, Gary.
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/28/2020 5:06:00 AM
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Thank you Jenna. :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2020 2:52:00 AM
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- Four sad lines ... great written, Gary ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/28/2020 3:54:00 AM
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Thank you Anne-Lise. :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/27/2020 5:28:00 AM
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I understand this. Well done Gary :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/27/2020 5:28:00 AM
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Thank you Heidi. :)

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