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Just One Thing

Dear Father in heaven if you granted a wish or a prayer for just one thing i wouldnt want jewls or a big diamond ring I would not want riches or fame id just ask for a mother that i could call by her name i know it can never be as my mum was taken twice from me but just for one second just for a moment of time i wish I could see this mother of mine so many times i did cry and how the years i lost just happend to fly by i know there is nothing I can do exept think of the day we will be reunited with you, she would wait right at hevens door and there ill see my mother forever more no more sorrow no more pain for we will be together again and i will be happy and even more glad for on that day as ill also see my amazing dad.

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Date: 6/29/2015 7:33:00 AM
The lord heard every word and one day you will see, mom, dad and your whole Heavenly Family. You are Blessed.
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Date: 5/30/2014 1:46:00 PM
Very nice and touching, Diane.
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Date: 5/30/2014 10:07:00 AM
This is so touching and I can feel your longing to see your mother again, but maybe not in this time yet. Wish you could be with your mother again, even in your beautiful dreams. Thanks for sharing, this is great pen.
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Date: 5/29/2014 6:56:00 AM
Diane, I wish I could just give you a warm motherly hug.. I will pray God to comfort you.. Although sad, you convey your feelings beautifully... Hugs.. Arlene..
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Date: 5/28/2014 3:52:00 AM
Sad little poem this... hopefully the process of writing will help ease the pain.
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Date: 5/27/2014 9:22:00 AM
Sad and touching! Great write - well done!
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Diane Christian
Date: 5/27/2014 2:51:00 PM
Thank yoú I am sentimental natured and naturaly caring
Date: 5/27/2014 8:27:00 AM
- A heartbreaking, but sweet little prayer Diane! - Love it!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Diane Christian
Date: 5/27/2014 2:49:00 PM
Thank yoú Anne- lise
Date: 5/27/2014 8:24:00 AM
Such a sad write Diane...you will see them again... Hugs Tim
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Diane Christian
Date: 5/27/2014 2:47:00 PM
Thanks and yes I believe we meet again in a better place.

Book: Shattered Sighs