Just One More Day

Dad Revisited

RIP 1924-2015


Last night I sat up in bed and prayed a little longer,
I asked god to send dad back for just one more  day with great fervour.

Dad was waiting for me in the verandah as soon as I reached,
Seated on his cane chair with legs outstretched.

Suited- booted, neat crisp turban, expectant eyes so tender
The same tweed coat, the warm muffler across his shoulder.

The moment he saw me he fumbled for his walking stick,
Stood up took a few steps forward in a nick.

We embraced each other tight as he planted as kiss on my head,
I nuzzled against his warm coat enjoying the love of my figurehead.

Warm drops of love fell on my cheeks,
Saw oceans pouring through his teary creeks.

'I can't control them', he said chokingly, 
Feeling the other's heart beats we clung to each other tightly.

'Let's go to the garden, the grape fruit is waiting for you!'
We walked together slowly over his leafy garden dew.

Dad showed me the new cuttings and saplings he had potted for me,
He pointed to the overgrown grass and said his workers were on leave.

He said,' Ah, for more varieties of flowers!
But the dogs don't spare them in my bowers'.

We smiled and saw the overladen grape fruit trees,
I plucked three grapefruits and said they would suffice with a tease.

We slowly climbed up the steps to our sunny verandah to sit alone,
He asked me what was it that I had wanted to tell him over the phone.

I read out my poem, '13, West Macott Road', a nostalgia shakeup, 
Of our ancestral home in Poona where he had grown up.

I was reared up there, too, by my grandparents,
He wept and hugged each other, our undying love evident.

'I can't believe you had this talent and I didn't know about it till now,
You always make me cry with your emotions, but no more will I allow!'

He took out his kerchief to wipe my tears, his permanent flair,
I was still sniffing when I sighted his empty cane chair.



December 10, 2015
Contest: Just One More Day
Sponsor: Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 16, 2015 at 12:37 AM
BALVEEN, congrats on your fine win. SKAT
Cheema Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 7:34 AM
Thanks Ska and love!
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 7:54 AM
Very sad :-( congratulations on your win!
Cheema Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 4:04 PM
Thanks Eve!
La France Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Balveen, such a lovely and beautiful write for your father, I loved it 7 and congratulations on your win ~
Cheema Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 4:04 PM
Losing parents at any age is a loss, Constance. Thanks!
Haight Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 6:35 PM
Such warm memories, about our dad, Balveen, and so beautifully conveyed in your poem. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 4:06 PM
For most parents are a boon! Thanks Sandra!
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December 13, 2015 at 5:19 PM
A wonderful day, congratulations.
Cheema Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 4:05 PM
I know Richards! Thanks!
Allison Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 3:52 PM
Many congrats on your win Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx
Cheema Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 4:07 PM
Thanks Jan!
Scars Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 3:31 PM
Balveen, many thanks for being a part of my contest, congrats on your win...*smiles*-luloo :)
Cheema Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 4:08 PM
Thanks Laura! You brought out the hidden feelings and emotions! Love......
Godwin Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 1:46 AM
Oh, my gosh - Balveen, I am blown away in the best possible way from this full blown and dramatic write - WOW ... CayCay
Cheema Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 1:51 AM
Cay Cay, you are such a aweetheart! How many of my poems have you read? Today I'm on the moon with such deep and introspective praises! Love.....
Allison Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 2:06 PM
Oh Balveen so many memories - I love the way you ended the poem too - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Cheema Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 7:19 AM
Thanks Jan!
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