Just One More Day

Dad Revisited

RIP 1924-2015


Last night I sat up in bed and prayed a little longer,
I asked god to send dad back for just one more  day with great fervour.

Dad was waiting for me in the verandah as soon as I reached,
Seated on his cane chair with legs outstretched.

Suited- booted, neat crisp turban, expectant eyes so tender
The same tweed coat, the warm muffler across his shoulder.

The moment he saw me he fumbled for his walking stick,
Stood up took a few steps forward in a nick.

We embraced each other tight as he planted as kiss on my head,
I nuzzled against his warm coat enjoying the love of my figurehead.

Warm drops of love fell on my cheeks,
Saw oceans pouring through his teary creeks.

'I can't control them', he said chokingly, 
Feeling the other's heart beats we clung to each other tightly.

'Let's go to the garden, the grape fruit is waiting for you!'
We walked together slowly over his leafy garden dew.

Dad showed me the new cuttings and saplings he had potted for me,
He pointed to the overgrown grass and said his workers were on leave.

He said,' Ah, for more varieties of flowers!
But the dogs don't spare them in my bowers'.

We smiled and saw the overladen grape fruit trees,
I plucked three grapefruits and said they would suffice with a tease.

We slowly climbed up the steps to our sunny verandah to sit alone,
He asked me what was it that I had wanted to tell him over the phone.

I read out my poem, '13, West Macott Road', a nostalgia shakeup, 
Of our ancestral home in Poona where he had grown up.

I was reared up there, too, by my grandparents,
He wept and hugged each other, our undying love evident.

'I can't believe you had this talent and I didn't know about it till now,
You always make me cry with your emotions, but no more will I allow!'

He took out his kerchief to wipe my tears, his permanent flair,
I was still sniffing when I sighted his empty cane chair.



December 10, 2015
Contest: Just One More Day
Sponsor: Laura Loo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/16/2015 12:37:00 AM
BALVEEN, congrats on your fine win. SKAT
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/21/2015 7:34:00 AM
Thanks Ska and love!
Date: 12/14/2015 7:54:00 AM
Very sad :-( congratulations on your win!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/14/2015 4:04:00 PM
Thanks Eve!
Date: 12/14/2015 12:00:00 AM
Balveen, such a lovely and beautiful write for your father, I loved it 7 and congratulations on your win ~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/14/2015 4:04:00 PM
Losing parents at any age is a loss, Constance. Thanks!
Date: 12/13/2015 6:35:00 PM
Such warm memories, about our dad, Balveen, and so beautifully conveyed in your poem. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/14/2015 4:06:00 PM
For most parents are a boon! Thanks Sandra!
Date: 12/13/2015 5:19:00 PM
A wonderful day, congratulations.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/14/2015 4:05:00 PM
I know Richards! Thanks!
Date: 12/13/2015 3:52:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/14/2015 4:07:00 PM
Thanks Jan!
Date: 12/13/2015 3:31:00 PM
Balveen, many thanks for being a part of my contest, congrats on your win...*smiles*-luloo :)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/14/2015 4:08:00 PM
Thanks Laura! You brought out the hidden feelings and emotions! Love......
Date: 12/13/2015 1:46:00 AM
Oh, my gosh - Balveen, I am blown away in the best possible way from this full blown and dramatic write - WOW ... CayCay
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/13/2015 1:51:00 AM
Cay Cay, you are such a aweetheart! How many of my poems have you read? Today I'm on the moon with such deep and introspective praises! Love.....
Date: 12/9/2015 2:06:00 PM
Oh Balveen so many memories - I love the way you ended the poem too - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/10/2015 7:19:00 AM
Thanks Jan!
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