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Just One More Day If Death would grant, just one more day, I’d use that time to simply play. I'd take you in my arms once more, and get to know you like before. If I could, but see you again, without the fog of grief or pain. I would start my day with a smile, if we could just talk for a while. I'd say the words kept in my heart, like how I loved you from the start. And to mend a heart that’s broken, silent feelings would be spoken. I'd snuggle close and hold your hand, letting you know just where I stand. I'd reacquaint myself with you, so you would know my love was true. I would spend our time together, wishing it would last forever. And with our lips pressed in a kiss, I’d fill your last moments with bliss. Written Dec. 8th, 2015 for " JUST ONE MORE DAY - Poetry Contest ".

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Date: 1/4/2016 6:37:00 PM
Congrats on ur win with this remarkable poem, u deserve the best, this is very touchy and deep in an elegant way....hugs / / :) dalia
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/5/2016 10:19:00 AM
Thank you Dalia, your words have brought a smile to my day. Emile.
Date: 12/17/2015 4:22:00 AM
lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!
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Date: 12/17/2015 8:54:00 AM
Thank you Funom, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 12/16/2015 12:35:00 AM
EMILE, congrats on your fine win. SKAT
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Date: 12/16/2015 10:19:00 AM
Thank you SKAT, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 12/14/2015 8:36:00 AM
Very nice flow and lovely content, Emile. Well done.
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Date: 12/16/2015 10:19:00 AM
Thank you James, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 12/14/2015 12:19:00 AM
I loved your entry Emile Congratulations on your win. Your ending was superb!
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Date: 12/16/2015 10:18:00 AM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 12/13/2015 11:53:00 PM
Emile, a beautiful write, congratulations ~
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/14/2015 6:40:00 PM
Thanks Broken, I appreciate your visits. Emile.
Date: 12/13/2015 7:31:00 PM
so sweet and sad. Congrats. I really enjoyed this one.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/14/2015 6:40:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your visits. Emile.
Date: 12/13/2015 5:13:00 PM
Lovely thoughts, Emile. Congrats on your nice win. Sandra
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/14/2015 6:41:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your visits. Emile.
Date: 12/13/2015 3:46:00 PM
Such a tender emotional write Emile congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/14/2015 6:41:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your visits. Emile.
Date: 12/13/2015 3:26:00 PM
Sweet Emile..congrats on your win and thank you for being a part of my contest...-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 12/14/2015 6:42:00 PM
Thanks Laura, it was my pleasure. Emile.
Date: 12/9/2015 8:29:00 AM
Simply delightful Emile! Exquisite flow and couplet rhyming... Well done! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/9/2015 11:23:00 AM
Thanks Keith, I appreciate your encouragement. Emile.

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