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Going back for just one more… A drink, a pill, a thrill Going back to discover the arousal Flowing through arteries Veins with a crimson flood Of stirring compulsions Complicating the silent thoughts Of one who is hooked On the drink, pill, thrill The artificial joy that leads A heart toward self-destruction Going back for just one more… Idea that fills the spirit With a sort of feigned joy Inspiring feelings of fake Happiness that colors moments In hues of ebony sorrow Wicked pretenses brought to life Amid lonely silence and fright That lives within the one who Listens to the synthetic ritual Learned when the craving consumes Going back for just one more.. Phony feeling of hope Lingering on the haunted mind Of one who heeds the impulse Leading to using again and again Taking all that the feeling gives With a lingering ache for a chance To loose the pain and sorrow Within the false stimulation Of a drink, a pill – a thrill That leaves you yearning for Just one more!

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Date: 12/25/2020 1:55:00 AM
Great poem on addiction. There was a time I was tempted to drink but I stopped in time. Happy Christmas. ~~
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Date: 12/24/2020 6:59:00 PM
I wish I could have thought up an entry as thoughtful as this one. I will be appalled if you do not place!
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Date: 12/24/2020 6:29:00 PM
Superb penning Gina, really getting to the heart of the matter showing how tempting any addiction can be whether it be drugs drink or whatever may be controlling our lives. This has good imagery and insightful thought, really effective piece. Have a happy Christmas day, blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 12/24/2020 10:20:00 AM
This poem speaks deeply to me. as a recovering alcoholic I applaud this verse heartily. it is difficult to pinpoint how many great lines you've constructed in this piece. You should enter it into my Addiction contest! Really, a very good poem that is marvelous in style, structure, and meaning. Well done Madam!
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