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My husband had been battling cancer for two and a half years when it suddenly moved to his brain. We thought he couldn't speak anymore and all of a sudden one night he finally said "I love you. You're beautiful." That's pretty well the only words he repeated for a whole week to both myself and his daughter. He said it at least fifty times... what a pure heart he had ~

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I know it’s selfish
to miss the days
the hospital bed
was in the livingroom
when I could still
caress your hand
and climb up to
hold you close to me

I know it’s selfish
to miss the days
when I could hear
your labored breath
echo throughout

I know it’s selfish
but what I would give
to go back to the last time
you looked at me
and whispered
I love you
you’re beautiful



AP: 3rd place 2021

Submitted on November 25, 2020 for contest THE LAST 1 sponsored by ANTHONY BIAANCO  -  RANKED 1ST

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Date: 2/4/2021 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A loving and wonderful write. It is not selfish at all. Thanks for the note at the top. You are very lucky he could say those words to you. Heaven has another angel. Be blessed today with your win and everyday.........................
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/4/2021 3:57:00 PM
He certainly was a blessing in my life in so many ways ~ thanks, Paula
Date: 2/3/2021 8:30:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Hugs.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/4/2021 10:54:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha. Much appreciated~
Date: 2/3/2021 6:48:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... as you bare your soul with your earnest, "I know it’s selfish..." which is actually... being lovingly human and humane. God bless you. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/3/2021 7:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, Beata. Most appreciated ~
Date: 2/3/2021 3:20:00 PM
Your recent years are so filled with emotions, Line. Surely, you did your best. This poem though, is written straight from the heart and it certainly tugs us readers pretty hard. We need to hear this to know how it can be when it's done well. And, of course, we need to hug those we care for and live with gratitude. Congratulations on your fine win.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/3/2021 3:33:00 PM
Thank you very much, Greg ~
Date: 2/3/2021 2:29:00 PM
Line, a big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Made me tear up! Janice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/3/2021 2:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice. Most appreciated ~
Date: 2/3/2021 1:42:00 PM
So sad! God bless you and congrats on your top win. Love and prayers, Gina
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/4/2021 10:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gina. Most appreciated ~
Date: 11/25/2020 3:36:00 PM
Hello Lin, you and your husband were soulmates, You cherished every day you had together. I do not think it selfish to go back to the time he looked at you and said "I love you." Bye for now my friend. hugs Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/27/2020 10:50:00 AM
Hello Lin you are welcome my friend. Bye for now.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/25/2020 6:29:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and much appreciated comment, Darlene ~
Date: 11/25/2020 1:09:00 PM
True love is not selfish sweet lady cherish each and every moment you had.... with love and hugs my dear friend from Ann xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/25/2020 6:30:00 PM
Thanks for your encouraging comment, Ann ~

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