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Just One More You were angry when you dissolved your life in beer; You were angry and roamed the roads alone. Did you believe that you were wronged When your world was finally gone? Always you loved to ride the long highways, Your mind absorbed all beauty you saw. Your attempts to lasso your tyranny failed, And sentenced you to a wanderer’s trail. Away from the love for you that never died.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/10/2018 6:40:00 AM
This is so well written and shows how sad it is when people take a path as you have described. Have a nice day :)
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Date: 5/4/2018 6:30:00 PM
Sad when the ones we love can't see the beauty before them and leave to wander looking for something they will never find. A truly wonderful poem that captures the pain perfectly.
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Date: 5/4/2018 2:05:00 AM
The love within shall never fade. Beautifully composed piece of work! A joy to read your write. Stay bright.
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Date: 5/1/2018 5:27:00 PM
somehow, we take life for granted; how sad...powerfully handled, sun!.. huggs
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/3/2018 6:25:00 PM
So right you are, Nette. Thank you.
Date: 4/30/2018 6:20:00 PM
Well penned, Sunlite. Sad choices people make when life could be so beautiful.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/3/2018 6:26:00 PM
Thank you, Line.

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