Maria Williams Poet Ballad

Just One Last Night - The Last Goodbye - A Musical Multi-media duet

Just One Last Night – The Last Goodbye - A Musical Mini-Movie Duet

Sometimes, love lingers long after the last goodbye. We think we’re letting go—but in truth, we’re holding on.
Not just to memories, but to the soul that once stayed beside us.
The Ballad and mini-movie is about love and loss, about the quiet ache that never quite fades.
It asks:
Can love become a tether?
When all it ever wanted was to be free?
“Just One Last Night” explores that space between presence and release—
Where devotion becomes a quiet chain, and one heart’s longing might keep another from crossing into the light.

Note:  The poem below qualifies the Lyrics of the Ballad in the movie which are not included here so as not to give away the story.
Click on CC on the video itself to follow the song lyrics. 

Tip: best listened to with headphones.

A flame in the dark I lit
blind to the shadow it cast
Love, a thread spun of moonlight, 
I thought forever would last

I built a shrine from memories
not caring I’d sealed his soul.
Lingering on ~ his reluctant spirit
Between enduring torn.

The path ahead for me was dim
The fault all mine – he couldn’t soar
Reluctantly, with laboured breath,
I released and let my true love go

I lost his Soul with poignant grace
With soulful sorrow upon my face.

I invite you to click on and watch my video now to appreciate the impact of this poem.

If the video and lyrics touches you in any way please share on your social media or to friends, It could give solace to or bring just one person from that deep dark place and the production has done it's job. Thank you. Hugs xoxoxo 

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Rowena Velasco August 5, 2025 at 5:31 AM Maria, this is deeply moving. The way you capture the lingering ache of love and the quiet courage it takes to finally let go—it's heartbreaking and beautiful. The imagery of a flame in the dark and a soul held by memory stayed with me. I’ll definitely watch the video and share it forward. Thank you for creating something so tender and powerful. Maria Williams August 5, 2025 at 6:07 AM Thanks so much Rowena, I appreciate it, also the one above called Divine Intervention is the one where my prayer sent at just the right time saved this young mans life. He created a truly beautiful video in gratitude. I'll be checking out more of your awesome poems soon...Hugs

Victor Buhagiar July 22, 2025 at 3:29 AM Ages ago I was in love, but she left me. Now in my old age, though I still love my dead wife, I occasional dream. I prefer not to but can one control one's dreams? Hugs. Maria Williams July 22, 2025 at 5:15 AM Dearest Victor,that’s such a tender reflection… Love leaves traces in us that time can’t always smooth away. I believe dreams sometimes carry what the heart still holds quietly, even when we don’t invite it. You loved deeply—and that kind of love never really disappears, does it? Sending you warmth and hugs in return

Valsa George July 20, 2025 at 9:01 PM I was transported to a world of love and the pangs of its loss. Maria and Ron, I must say that you are an incredible pair, scripting masterpieces and taking the viewers to a realm when all get drenched in powerful emotions of joy and sorrow. I felt as if I was watching a mini movie with all its technical perfection, excellent cast, lovely lyrics and beautiful acting that brings the characters to life. This story resonates with the emotions of everyone who has known the depth of love and its loss. In toto, a well structured cinematic production. Kudos, dear friend Maria. Maria Williams July 20, 2025 at 11:16 PM Dear Valsa, Your words touched me deeply — thank you for such a beautiful and thoughtful response. It means so much coming from a poet whose own work I admire. I’m so glad the story spoke to you. Ron and I poured our hearts into this one, and knowing it resonated with you — with all its emotion and nuance — is a true gift. As this video touched you, please consider sharing it on your social media or with friends. If it brings solace to even one person or gently pulls someone from that deep, dark place… then it’s done its job. Hugs Maria

Nette Onclaud July 20, 2025 at 8:48 PM okay. Im in on this arresting piece complete with visuals, poetic lines, and enduring music...maria, this is breathtakingly delicate! Soupie mail! Maria Williams July 20, 2025 at 11:18 PM Dear Nette, thank you for such a beautiful and thoughtful response. As this video touched you, please consider sharing it on your social media or with friends. If it brings solace to even one person or gently pulls someone from that deep, dark place… then it’s done its job. Hugs Maria Ps i've replied to your soupe

Daniel Henry Rodgers July 20, 2025 at 4:53 AM Dear Maria, I loved every nuance of the video and could tell that you put a great deal of effort into this. The story is sad and very relatable to me being a former military soldier. Many do not return from war and those that do struggle. You are amazing creator of both word and video and glad I could be a participant. Summmer Blessings, Dear Maria, Daniel Maria Williams July 20, 2025 at 5:51 AM Dear Daniel, thanks so much and I'm thrilled it spoke to you. I'll be catching up on your poems soon, I've been really busy with babysitting lately and throwing in the odd video or two.Take care and once again I appreciate the visit and kindness Daniel...Hugs

Michael Tor July 19, 2025 at 11:43 PM Hi Maria, I've busy with my brother's house and my wife who was ill and haven't been on the Soup. I really have to catch up on everyone. I love this heartfelt piece of yours and Ron. Your mini Movie really captures true love and, love that is lost. Everything about this was crafted perfectly by you. The lyrics and the music were perfect for each other. It tells a sad story that is real to life of married soldiers going to war and not coming back. You capture the moment and the listeners heart. Maria Williams July 20, 2025 at 12:45 AM Dearest Michael,thank you so much for your beautiful words—they truly mean a lot. I'm so glad the emotions and message came through clearly. Creating "Just One Last Night" was a heartfelt journey, and having Ron bring it to life with his touch made it all the more special. Your support and encouragement inspire us to keep going—thank you again for taking the time to visit ,I appreciate it all the more knowing how busy you are. Always praying for both you and Judy, I send her all my best wishes and a big hug to both of you...Hugs Michael Tor July 19, 2025 at 11:50 PM You and Ron have done it again. Your videos are to watch and listen to. They capture your feelings and emotions. Your message conveys as you lead us to your conclusion through your amazing lyrical words. Adding Ron to assist in this creation of yours just makes it that much better. This "Just One Last Night." Is a Favorite. I will send you a message soon on Judy. Please pray for her to get her strength and get better. Thank you. Love to you and Ron and the family from Judy and I...

sara Etgen-Baker July 19, 2025 at 4:45 PM a beautiful but poignant piece. The last two lines brought me to tears. You're amazing! Maria Williams July 20, 2025 at 12:39 AM How lovely to see you visiting Sara, I truly appreciate it my friend. I will be catching up soon and visiting your lovely work...Hugs

Kim Rodrigues July 19, 2025 at 6:41 AM Very nice! Maria Williams July 20, 2025 at 12:39 AM Thanks so much dear Kim, glad you liked it...Hugs