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You made us cry and you didn't care About the words you spelt as blade so unfair That hit all my body, then it suddenly melt Because of that venomous comment But it is my fault cause I forget That stars end up into black holes Now I'm counting my tears when every night falls Yet I can't deny the supernovae calls I'm grateful for all what you've said and done These hopeful souvenirs will never be gone They are graved in my heart as history in stone Will I forgive or will I forget? I'm confused about first step to next You don't understand how I feel You don't know the sore in heart so real So deep that I can't bear It was a lie as if I was living a dream Until my ears heard those words & now I scream But I've a moon & white dwarf with whom I eat Ice cream Best friends full with laughs that will never disappear One is shining as a star, precious as a pearl The other is strong as the see, calm as the breeze We will not meet again so please try to forgive

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Date: 12/23/2023 3:20:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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