Just Once I'Ll Feel Love
just once I'll feel love
until then I'll just wait
sitting patiently, sort of
trying to self-actuate
once hope reigns it's hopeless
no need to cast love aside
catch a lightness to possess
enchanting oneness a rising tide
I'll dig holes for your treasure
'til my hands all calloused and raw
leave lid of chest to open pleasure
let aloneness be a forgotten flaw
feel my way into hearts chamber
each beat another rush of life
ever closer to life's remainder
living begins when hearts derive
love in all its myriad forms
overt or subtle in its display
vales are lifted and we transform
enclosed with love, our own cliché
© Goode Guy 2011-07-13
is an acrostic quatrain a acrostrain or a quastic?
Copyright © Goode Guy | Year Posted 2011
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