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Just Once

Just once I’d like to hold you, To keep you in my arms. That one time I could have you here, And make sure you were safe from harm. Just once I’d like to kiss you, And feel your lips on mine. The softest touch and strongest passion, In one moment in itself divine. Just once I’d like to love you, To know you love me too, To feel the things that I have not, Throughout this life and truth. And just once, I would like the strength to say goodbye. To depart from you like the sunlight’s last rays, And never let a tear shed from my eye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/2/2011 6:18:00 AM
so lovely we all will help you know your forms, this one can be labeled a number of different forms the biggest catch all category is VERSE, then you could also call this one RHYME and also because you grouped in 4 lines QUATRAIN...and here is my last thought..there is this form that is often used for prayers or prayer like writing it's called a kryielle..your repition of "Just once" which I LOVE..you could make this a fine kryeille! Light & Love
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Date: 1/20/2011 6:22:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Mandy. Wishing you a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2011 3:23:00 PM
AWEHH! that made me all happy inside you have wonderful talent.
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