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Just Me And My Moon

Upon this pebbled path I tread wistless in wonder in heat and thunder on such a simple journey just me (a man) and my moon my faith's been tested my thoughts arrested breathing in both good and bad never really happy nor sad I'm blissfully blighted rarely enriched or super excited floating aimless but not really free that's just the way, you see the bends have become a bit bigger the narrows getting much too small the thick is shaking (his head) the thin unmistaking and unforgiving my hand once offered to steady (for a fortnight or two) ready it may or not (for you) to travel together for a few parallel roads paved in precision not giving in to any one decision driven off into greatness a gallant gallop greeting history an entangled tandem of intersection oh what's it going to be love what's it going to be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/5/2018 4:01:00 PM
Joy to read :) xomo
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Date: 6/5/2018 3:23:00 PM
Wow Tim. We are walking the road together, looking at both my poem and yours, but yours is absolutely beautiful. I love it! :)
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Date: 6/5/2018 3:03:00 PM
Your words have a marvelous flow, Tim, enriched by alliteration and creative descriptions. I hope you and your love gallantly gallop through a happy future, though you may not achieve this if floating aimlessly. A thought-provoking write! Hugs, carolyn
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