Just Me

If it’s just me and my mind I’ll go crazy I need you If it’s just me and my heart I won’t feel Hold me If it’s just me and my dreams I won’t sleep Guide me If it’s just me and my peace I won’t rest show me tranquility If it’s just me and my fear I’ll stay afraid Calm me If it’s just me alone I’m a prisoner Free me

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Caryl Muzzey

Date: 6/16/2010 5:19:00 AM

A fabulous write, very insightful. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Ginger Marie

Date: 11/3/2009 5:28:00 AM

Oh my goodness. I swear we have the same mind, yet you are the one that can speak it. It's great!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/18/2009 7:13:00 AM

Jodie, This is super. You have totally captured the way I feel about my Ingrid. How sweet and perfect. You have captured love from every angle making it one eternal round. Thank you, a LOT! Lovingly, Dane

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/17/2009 4:23:00 AM

Nicely written. Keep writing. Sara