Just Me

She slipped in then slipped out   spinning my revolving   heart   a weekly affair doesn't seem fair life turned about feelings flew free but still here I am just me
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Murray Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 5:00 PM
We all yearn for something more, if only others would too.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 8:27 AM
Poems that make you go hmmmm. <3
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 11:13 PM
I love the twisting of emotion, your poem bigger than its words :) xomo!
Gauthier Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 4:11 PM
Well written poem, Tim. A lovely read. Well done.
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 3:25 PM
- Sounds so sad, Tim - I wish you a wonderful and peaceful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 3:13 PM
A very beautiful but sad tale of fleeting love and loss and ending in loneliness butnever give up the dream of finding the right person Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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