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Just Married

Their love for one another knows no bounds. 
 Newlyweds still floating high on cloud nine, 
      Joyfully riding life's merry-go-round. 
    Bright stars in their sky perfectly align; 
    The sun on their horizon brightly shine. 
    A long-engaged couple married, at last.  
   On their honeymoon having such a blast 
         As if living the greatest fairytale. 
The moment their eyes met, a spell was cast. 
      A love like theirs, an incredible tale!



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Date written:11/20/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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George Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 8:58 PM
Lovely penning ! Their elation is so palpable ! Well executed and in perfect conformity with the form Edward !
Pandit Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 2:43 PM
Well done in this hard to execute form. You chose a happy theme.
Ibeh Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 3:44 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-) It's always a delight to hear your feedback, my friend
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 11:56 AM
Hello Edward, the married couple will be happlly on their honeymoon. Blessings.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 11:29 AM
Hello Edward, you are welcome my friend. Blessings my friend.
Ibeh Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 3:42 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene:-)
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